I enjoyed this story a great deal. This particular type of unaware vore doesn't get written enough.

Hmm, an interesting predator. I thought at first this was a changeling thing, but a fae spirit is worse in many ways, as they wouldn't be working with anyone, just doing it one person at a time. Nice stuff, BTW, good description and everything.

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Thanks! ^^ glad you liked it.

This whole thing is amazing.
the first chapter on it's own was really interesting. I'm not one for vore usually, but this made it both terrifying and interesting.

Then, adding the second chapter....blows this thing up to "Dear Lord I need more" status. A Fae Spirit haunting dreams of ponies opens up a lot of doors. I'd love to see more of this.

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Heh, thanks for the praise. The fae thing was kinda just there because I don't like leaving big plotholes unexplained. Can't promise it'll go anywhere, but who knows.

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If it doesn't go anywhere, it's fine. It works perfectly well just as it is.

But, yeah, if you get more ideas, I'll be ready to read