• Published 15th Dec 2020
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The Cutie Re-Mark: The Ultimate Enemy - LoganRyder



During Twilight's conflict with Starlight, she ends up facing an new enemy, one she and her friends have wronged....

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Chapter 9

The CMC watched as the girls looked around for their dragon friend. With the ponies eventually seeing them and heading over.

"Girls, we need your help! " Twilight said in desperation

"Let me guess, you all want to find Spike?" Apple Bloom asked

"Yeah, have you 3 seen him?" Rainbow Dash asked

"Yeah." Scootaloo said

"But wait, how would you know what we were doing?" Rarity asked

This left the three fillies silent as the girls looked at them.

"Cause we're kinda looking for him too." Sweetie Belle said

"We saw him at the exit to Ponyville and teleport away." Scootaloo added

The ponies nodded and ran to the destination and began to search for the missing dragon


Spike was currently flying away from his former home as far as he could. He had to find a way to stop his home from being destroyed. Not only that, but to think that the source of it was the Princess of Friendship of all ponies. As he flew away, he shed tears in his eyes out of betrayal.

"And where are you off too?" An familiar voice said

Spike turned around and saw it was none other then Discord himself.

"What do you want Discord?" Spike asked

"I believe you already know from what I asked you." Discord replied

"I'm leaving Ponyville, what does it look like I'm doing?" Spike asked

"It looks like your leaving your friends." Discord said with a frown

Spike only winced at the last part and said in dismay "You don't know?"

"Know what?" Discord asked

Spike only looked down and began to tell Discord everything. The battle with Starlight, then with his evil self from the future, then how he managed to stop him from causing the destruction of Equestria itself as well as the destruction of his friends before he left them when he realized their selfishness caused his evil self to exist.

With a bewildered look, Discord asked

"So let me get this straight, Starlight Glimmer traveled back in time to stop the Rainboom, then put you in another timeline where an evil older you killed the Princesses, me and Fluttershy and her friends, then came here to make sure you become him by killing me and our world's Twilight and her friends and you stopped him with the help of the other world's version of Chrysalis and Starswirl? In fact that's why your flying in the sky. Then you left because of how the girls were treating you since they caused the evil you to turn evil from the beginning?" Discord said with need of clarification

Spike nodded as Discord only looked with a saddened look on his face, he then sighed and said

"Very well Spike, if you wish to make this choice, I respect your decision."

Spike only nodded and said "Goodbye Discord. Say bye to Big Mac for me."

Discord acknowledged his answer with a nod as the young drake flew away once more to an unknown location.


The ponies were heading over to the path that showed the exit to Ponyville. They ran with every ounce of breath in their lungs to see their dragon friend once more.

"Spike!?" Twilight called out as she flew in the air

"Spikey-Wikey? Where are you?!" Rarity shouted

The ponies continued to call out to their friend, until they noticed a familiar face, it was Discord, who only gave a blank look to them.

"Discord? What are you doing here?" Celestia asked him

The spirit of chaos only looked at the girls and said "I can ask you each the very same question."

"You know too huh?" Rainbow Dash said rhetorically

"Yes and seriously, I understand that you each liked to mess with him, but come on. Using him for your own selfish needs, nearly killing him, but hurting him to the point where he turns evil and destroys and kills the entire PLANET aside from Ponyville? Even I myself would never drop to that level of despicable." Discord said, his tone showing his clear disappointment at the girls

The girls looked down at the point he made, even though Discord had his moments and was neormally humorous and funny, it shifted to him being funny to outright dead serious, firm and in a way angry. Cadance stepped up to him and said

"Listen Discord, we know what we did was wrong and we want to make up for it. Have you seen Spike anywhere?"

Discord was left pondering his decision as to what choice he should make: Forgive the girls and help make amends or let Spike leave them and find an uncertain future to avoid the one that almost occured with his evil self. As Discord pondered his choice, he let out a breath of air and said

"He left Ponyville near the exit, but he didn't say where."

The ponies nodded and headed there, hoping that they had not missed him. Until Fluttershy saw that Discord was not joining them and asked him

"Aren't you coming Discord?"

Discord only looked at her, his eyes showed clear reluctance as he saw the begging eyes of not just her, but that of her friends who were desperately trying to apologize to their lost friend. Twilight even showed the tears in her her eyes at how she realized her selfishness and wanted to apologize to Spike.

Discord, seeing how much the predicament was affecting them said "Very well, but this changes nothing of what you did. Remember that."

The ponies nodded and ran to their destination.


Spike was flying in the sky and gave a emotionless expressiom as he flew thank to his recharged power, he pondered as to whether him leaving would change the future or worsen it instead. As he was contemplating hus decisions, he began to notice someone was behind him.

"Spike!" A familiar voice cried out to him

The baby dragon turned and saw the very last few people that he needed to see right now.

"Spike! There you are!" Twilight said in relief

"What. Are. YOU. Doing. Here?" Spike said in a tone of fury as he clenched his teeth.