The Cutie Re-Mark: The Ultimate Enemy

by LoganRyder

Chapter 7

The girls were silent at the glaring alicorns as Spike only stepped up and said truthfully

"When i met him, he said he turned both him and the future that way because of the way you treated him. Remember the time back in last Hearth's Warming when I was frozen and all of you laughed?" Spike answered

"But that was meant to be a joke!" Rainbow justified

"And you didn't think to help me why? Plus i almost froze to death!" Spike responded

This answer shocked the girls as they heard their friend continue

"How about when it was Twilight's birthday, yet I wasn't invited." Spike further added in dismay

"But we-" Twilight said

"But what? You didn't think to bring me like the way you brought the girls? " Spike replied, his tone getting more harsher

"Twilight, is this true?" Princess Celestia asked

The purple alicorn didn't know how to answer, her and the Elements were left speechless and didn't know what to do or say

"Answer the question, Twilight." Shining Armor further pressed

"I-I...I didn't mean to hurt him." Twilight said

"And yet from what the other Spike said, you and these 5 have. And on top of that, you pushed him too far onto a path of false hope." Princess Luna said in a betrayed manner

"Twilight, how could you? You helped me regain my friendship with Sunburst and yet you do this to your own friends?" Starlight asked in disbelief

"It's not just her to blame, it's ALL of you." Spike said

This silenced the ponies as Cadance asked "What do you mean?"

Spike, despite knowing the answer and the tragic fates of the ponies said

"He also said you never had any trust in him and saw him as a threat and thought of personally dealing with him, not to mention that you were trying to keep your power for your own vanity. He said that to me himself personally and cried for goodness sake, he even told me how much you tortured him."

"What? We would never do that!" Shining said in defense

"Honestly I'm not sure if i should believe you at this point Prince Armor. I mean, it didn't stop you at the wedding when Chrysalis attacked, on top of it you didn't even bother to care or apologise. As well as Cadance with Twilight, Celestia with Tirek when he attacked and Luna with how she was during the whole Nightmare Moon fiasco." Spike answered

The Elements, Starlight and the Princesses only gave looks of silence and were stunned at how the young dragon only expressed distrust and called him his royal name then his normal one. Not only that, but he was beginning to act like his dark self as Shining was left stunned at the baby dragon's answer.

"I'm going to head out and cool off, I'll see you soon.....hopefully." Spike said

Spike, using the powers from the gem he ate, teleported away, leaving his former friends behind, who looked on in disbelief.

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The girls were left in silence at the revelation, especially Celestia, Shining, Luna and Cadance. They only silently looked down at how they possibly lost a friend. Some of the ponies had different reactions, Fluttershy only cried behind her mane, Rainbow Dash tried to fight her sadness, but was in vain, Rarity only cried and smeared her makeup, Pinkie Pie's mane deflated and caused her to look down in sadness, Applejack was stubbornly trying to keep herself from breaking down, Twilight had it worse as she cried abd her eyes were red from her sobbing and was comforted by Starlight

"We never meant to hurt him. It's just we were really busy had to do alot of work and-" Twilight said

However, Celestia had enough of the muttering alicorn and shouted "ENOUGH!"

The princess of the sun had furiously snapped and looked at her protegee, who cowered along with the others.

"Twilight, walk with me. The rest of you go in the castle, we'll talk later." Celestia said in a dead serious tone

The girls didn't need to be told twice and did so, followed by Luna, Cadance and Shining

"Twilight do you know why I brought you here in Ponyville?" Celestia asked

Twilight only looked at her mentor and said "Yes Princess Celestia."

"Then if you were so busy all those years, why did you not speak with me about Spike?"

"I thought that you were busy and that I had to do something and if I didn't, you would lose faith in me."

Princess Celestia only looked at her apprentice and gave a look of guilt and sorrow at her state

"Twilight, if you were so worried, why did you not speak with me about the matter?" Celestia asked

Twilight answered "Because I thought that if I didn't, I would have lost my chance to make you proud of me."

Celestia only looked down and felt a tinge of sorrow at the issue and said to Twilight with a frown.

"My dear student, I will never be that way to you, I sent you here to learn more about the magic of friendship and solve friendship problems all over Equestria. But instead, you created a bigger one that had went against what I taught you. Needless to say, I am very disappointed in you and your friends. Word's can't describe how much I feel from this kind of act, not only for how you acted, but for thinking one of your friends and FAMILY even was some thing you and the others could take and use and then throw away."

Twilight only looked down in tears as she kept trying to apologize, but only left her more degraded and Celestia look in disappointment.

"I believe we should talk to your friends as well. They also clearly have a part of this and I want to find out what." Celestia said, as she teleported them both into Twilight's castle, with a sharp glare and Twilight a fearful gaze.

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Inside the castle, the girls were sitting in their chairs, with Princess Luna, Cadance and Shining.

"Do you think Twilight is alright?" Rarity said

"That depends what you mean. Her life, dignity or status?" Rainbow Dash asked

"From what you said Dash, I'm pretty sure she'd lose all 3 of those by now." Applejack responded

There was a flash behind them and they saw none other then Celestia, ready to speak.

Comments

[OP Omni God-Emperor Doom]

That's right Celestia! Scold Twilight and her Friends for their Sins! Glad Bad Karma finally Punished Twilight and her Friends for Spike's neglect.

It would be a ashamed to BREAK and DESTORY the Mane Six's Dignity and Status. IF Everypony/Everyone finds out on how they treated poor Spike like that. And CAUSED him to be Dark and Bad. And made a Dark Alternate Timeline!!!!

Especially if Ember and the Dragons, Thorax and the Reformed Changelings, Discord and Big Mac, the Crystal Ponies Fans of "Spike The Glorious", and even the Mane Six's Parents and the CMC finds out about the Mane Six's Abuse on Spike!!!

I will Pay to see the Mane Six get Dog piled and beaten up by Spike's TRUE Friends and Family!!! 😈

[Pete100]

"Twilight, how could you? You helped me regain my friendship with Sunburst and yet you do this to your own friends?" Starlight asked in disbelief

Starlight, shut up.

"He also said you never had any trust in him and saw him as a threat and thought of personally dealing with him, not to mention that you were trying to keep your power for your own vanity. He said that to me himself personally and cried for goodness sake, he even told me how much you tortured him."

Wait, really?

"Honestly I'm not sure if i should believe you at this point Prince Armor. I mean, it didn't stop you at the wedding when Chrysalis attacked. As well as Cadance with Twilight, Celestia with Tirek when he attacked and Luna with how she was during the whole Nightmare Moon fiasco." Spike answered

Was shining there when all that happened?

The Elements, Starlight and the Princesses only gave looks of silence and were stunned at how the young dragon only expressed distrust and called him his royal name then his normal one. Not only that, but he was beginning to act like his dark self as Shining was left stunned at the baby dragon's answer.

I suggest you probably send him back to that other world. Because, I ain’t dealing with another dark spike.

"My dear student, I will never be that way to you, I sent you here to learn more about the magic of friendship and solve friendship problems all over Equestria. But instead, you created a bigger one that had went against what I taught you. Needless to say, I am very disappointed in you and your friends. Word's can't describe how much I feel from this kind of act, not only for how you acted, but for thinking one of your friends and FAMILY even was some thing you and the others could take and use and then throw away."

She does realize it’s not just them, right?

[nightshroud96]

"Honestly I'm not sure if i should believe you at this point Prince Armor. I mean, it didn't stop you at the wedding when Chrysalis attacked, on top of it you didn't even bother to care or apologise. As well as Cadance with Twilight, Celestia with Tirek when he attacked and Luna with how she was during the whole Nightmare Moon fiasco." Spike answered

What did Spike mean by for Luna's case there?
She didn't did the whole NMM thing because "evulz", she essentially snapped and lashed out due to how much she suffered and all those negative emotions. in fact the whole Dark Spike mess is similar to the Nightmare Moon due to a major screw up.
Celestia wasn't there for Luna and didn't notice her suffering in time while the ponies of Equestria took Luna's work for granted and always didn't treated Luna as equals with Celestia for real.
And I am sure Luna did apologized too(even though she was essentially brainwashed by the Elements forcibly purifying her and the issues leading to NMM weren't really resolved).
In fact I feel like Luna wouldn't act bad towards Spike(like she would try to argue with the others that they shouldn't try to kill Spike or something) unlike the others due to she has much in common with Spike. Given how they are often in the shadows of others, both "out of place, both became something terrifying, etc.

I find the fic to be interesting with Spike facing his evil self and getting cool powers but..
Its really disappointing with how Luna was handled in here with what I mentioned and how she died in the future there along with how she easily got taken out and captured like that.. along with the embarrassment of she could have died but Starswirl doing that time-thing there, it just bugs me alot..
I like this fic but it does really bother me with what I mentioned there..
Sorry if I seem bothersome there.