A Displaced Radio Demon

by Rob_Rhapsody

Chapter 2

Author's Note:

Wow, I wasn’t expecting so many to like this story so much!
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“finally they’re gone” I said with my grin.”now to send out a token” I said. I brought out a small pocket sized radio, it was brown had three triangles for the channel viewing window, and beneath what seemed to be a cheshire grin.

“Hello, to anyone out there who finds this radio, I am Alastor, I am willing to help you out in any way I can, just turn the dial to Change the channel to the middle triangle and I’ll be there!“ I said into it. I then tossed it into a portal and got it back after a few moments. I then went back to reading a book.

—Later—

“I missed you big sister!” Said Luna.

-Clap- -Radio feedback- -Clap- -Clap- -Clap- -Radio feedback- -Clap-

They all looked towards where the clapping was coming from, only for me to walk into the light, my eyes glowing. “What a wonderful performance, drama, despair, failure, triumph, wonderful, just wonderful! I enjoyed every minute of it! I haven’t laughed that much since the stock-market crash of 1929, in another world! So many orphans” I said with my grin never faltering.

“A demon! What are you doing here?” asked Celestia, beginning to get angry.

“Alastor! You came, did you see us take down the bad guy?” asked Pinkie, running up to me.

“Indeed I did, I wouldn’t miss it for the world!” I said, smiling down at Pinkie.

“Who are you?” asked Celestia.

I began to sing.

Once my song ended Celestia was less convinced I was a good guy. I began shaking her hoof rapidly. “Alastor, pleasure to be meeting you sweetheart, quite a pleasure, never in my long years have I ever been in the presence of one of such majesty and Beauty!” I said smiling and giving her the special Alastor charm.

“Im, sorry for him Princess, he’s Pinkie’s friend, and he is a little much, but if Pinkie can vouch for him, I trust him” said Twilight.

“Yeah, he’s been my friend since forever! He’s been good ever since! except for that one pony” said Pinkie.

“But they clearly deserved it, they made her cry! And I just can’t stand seeing a young little pony cry!” I said defending myself.

“Yeah, besides, I’m sure their fur grew back eventually!” said Pinkie, not really helping my case.

Celestia looks at me and I just keep grinning like a psychopath, although I kind of am, must be the effect of being a demon.

“I don’t trust a demon, but if you do not harm any of my ponies, I can tolerate you, however if you do harm any of them, I will send you back to the pit you crawled out of!” said Celestia.

“Splendid, Pinkie pie my dear, I believe this deserves a party in the honor of the returned Princess Luna!” I said, completely dismissing Celestia’s threat, surprising her.

“Ghasp! You’re right! We need to get started right away!” said Pinkie, starting to ramble on about cake and party supplies, all the while Celestia glared daggers at me.

I teleported right next to her by becoming a shadow and popping up. “If you keep making that face, it just might stick that way!” I said grinning, letting my eyes become dials. “Who’s hungry, I’m in the mood for a good devil’s chocolate food cake! Who’s with me!” I said breaking the silence.

“Oooh! Me, me, memememe!” said Pinkie pie excitedly, while raising her hoof.

“Excellent, Lets be going!” I said, teleporting away.

Comments

[Dinokid11]

Excellent work

[Marcthelightspark2004]

"I'm mostly making this story because some people (you know who you are) have not written a story like this."

False, actually. I myself have written a story that features the Hazbin crew.

Also, displaced is one of the most popular forms of story on this site.

[Rob_Rhapsody]

Ok, who thinks I’ve nailed Alastor’s personality?

[Lorddarkrai2000]

Nailed it

[KarasAdamas]

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I think you're doing great so far! Can't wait for more, just no unecessary violence and I think you're good.

[3-tap]

I began to sing.

The song by TLT is good for the most part, but the main chorus/demon side part just isnt my favourite

[Waterpicker]

10578676
Apprently there are social media for the characters are canon.

[Rob_Rhapsody]

Oops, I may have deleted a chapter by accident, sorry guys.

[TheDragonSage]

10579571
Where is it?, I looked through your titles and short summaries and can’t seem to guess where the hazbin people be at, sooo he wins at being the first with an obvious hazbin hotel character, can tell me which one?

[Missty Griffion]

Lol some parts kinda made me chuckle

[PixelatedPerson]

They all looked towards where the clapping was coming from, only for me to walk into the light, my eyes glowing. “ What a wonderful performance, drama, despair, failure, triumph, wonderful, just wonderful! I enjoyed every minute of it! I haven’t laughed that much since the stock-market crash of 1989, in another world! ” I said with my grin never faltering.

You mean the 1929 stock market crash, comrade? Great depression and all?

[Rob_Rhapsody]

Oops I goofed.

[Rob_Rhapsody]

Ok all fixed. Thanks for the help.

[Sairresh]

So far little disappointed he's only repeating lines/actions from the cartoon but u should be running out of those soon so hoping that fixes my issue, also curious why rainbow didn't seem to know al, she is pinkies best friend u'd think pinkie would have introduced them especially if al isn't afraid defend pinkie

[dragonus85]

Celestia said not to harm her ponies but didn't he and pinkie say just before that that a pony was harmed? Heh.
Amusement.

[Rob_Rhapsody]

Yeah it’s funny how things work out isn’t it?

[lainverse]

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Well... It was in the past and he didn't truly harm that pony as it seems. At least nothing permanent. Just gave a lesson to learn. Considering he's a demon he could do much MUCH worse and yet he didn't. Guess Celli took that into consideration.

[Nightflight406]

“Yeah, besides, I’m sure their fur grew back eventually!” said Pinkie, not really helping my case.

WHAT HAPPENED????????????

[Painkiller]

You mean to tell us that in all the time he has apparently been stalking Pinkie Pie he has never had the privacy to make token? He just suddenly years after swapping dimensions decides to send group he only just introduced himself to away (claiming or at least implying he wont bother to see what trouble they are getting to, in favor of reading book) so he could finally do one stable thing connecting every displaced story and consequently the reason why so few of them are worth reading in the first place.

Surprisingly poisonous this logic injection turned out to be, but I feel it necessary to point out how important it is to think through timeskips. With personality like Alastors there is no way he spend all that time hidden from residents of ponyville.

Unless he spend his time elsewhere waiting for show to start running. Would make sense really, more opportunities to strike deals too.

[Black--Soul]

“I don’t trust a demon, but if you do not harm any of my ponies, I can tolerate you, however if you do harm any of them, I will send you back to the pit you crawled out of!” said Celestia.

Selfdefense? Protection of a foal in need? Perhaps a prank gone wrong? Bäääm Celestia is on him