Today. Today was the day. Luna had waited a full week since saving Hendrick from the fire. The medics had insisted time was needed, that healing him couldn’t be done all at once. She had debated it as simple magic, but they stopped her by explaining that if he was healed too quickly, his body might go into shock or become dependant of healing magic for its self-protection.
So, she had waited. A full week she had waited as she had gone about her duties, questions plinking against the inside of her skull and into the growing pool of curiosity that had started to build up within her.
Alongside the alicorn floated a bouquet of flowers. She wasn’t sure why Celestia had insisted on taking them with her. Apparently, it was common for a pony to bring a get well gift to someone she cared about.
The mare manning the front desk nodded to her, allowing her to proceed down the passage towards the room that housed the stallion whom had kissed her.
Kissed her...
In reflection, Luna realized she hadn’t been kissed before. Not on the lips, anyway. Her hooves had been kissed by a group of peasants at some point before her banishment, but it was an afterthought from them. She had seen it in their eyes. They had come to honor her sister; she had been an unwelcome intrusion upon their moment.
But not anymore. Not since Hendrick had entered into the public eye with his exploits. Ponies came to see her now, came to ask her questions. Though she wouldn’t say it aloud, the thing she was most scared of on her return had been that she wouldn’t be noticed, the same as before, which had provided fuel for the Nightmare to control her body again. Right up until the elements struck her and shattered, if only for a moment, the crushing despair that had cloaked her.
As the days had worn on and on though, her mind had shifted toward it once again against her will. It was a tablecloth that, having been stained with red wine and let dry, would never return to its old form no matter how much washing or hope was applied to it. Even now, as she marched towards Hendrick, she felt the stirring chill of the forgotten night as permanent within her as it had always been, sending phantom chills through her body.
But, as it always was when she was near the odd stallion, the chill felt farther and farther away as she approached. Perhaps this is what love feels like? Luna mused, her shoes clinking against the stone, hollow silver against the steadfast ground. A fire that burns away fears? Could pass through any threshold, despite its thickness?
As she thought, she came to the door, the very real physical boundary splitting her from Hendrick. Allowing a soft smile to break her royal facade, the princess leaned forward, as if to break through it, but froze when a voice pierced the wood, echoing into the hall as it rolled like thunder through her bones.
“I do not know how you escaped,” the voice whispered, an impossible volume to such a quiet tone. “Twice, even.” Its voice could only be explained as speaking while you inhaled with an echo sounding your words both before and after your own. “Fire will be your end, though. It’s scheduled.”
Carefully, Luna opened the door and peeked through the crack toward the pony on the bed. Suddenly, the speaker leaned forward, making his appearance visible to the princess. An ebony white skull reflected the moonlight through its eye sockets. “Understood?”
“Something stopping you from killing me now?” Hendrick’s voice held a shocking amount of bravery. “I expected more from Death himself.” Hisses of cold air shot through the skeleton’s teeth and he pinned Hendrick to the wall. Luna wanted very much to save him, but found her body frozen in fear. Slowly, she watched as Hendrick’s body changed slowly, clothes coming from his flesh as he turned paler and paler.
Luna watched in abject horror as Hendrick took the form of the very familiar human who had been in her dreams those weeks ago. “I can kill you whenever I like,” Death said, a sickle coming into view behind him as it levitated through the air. “But there are contracts, and there are rules...” He let go, Hendrick turning immediately back into his pony state. “I can’t interfere with a contract.” Hendrick’s face remained in the sheets of his bed, fatigue running its course through his body. Without another word, Death faded away from view.
As soon as he was fully gone, Luna rushed forward, her body no longer stiffened with terror. “Hendrick!” she called, tossing the flowers aside in her hurry to check on him. He didn’t answer, but the warmth of his skin and rhythmic beating of his heart kept her worst fears at bay. With slow, careful movements she stepped into the bed as well and placed her wing over his body. Though it was clear he didn’t need the warmth, she figured he could use any comfort she could provide.
“How long were you there?” he asked finally, surprising Luna with his sudden words. “And what did you see?”
“I saw him attack you...” Luna admitted. “But I couldn’t bring myself to do anything. I’m sorry.” And she truly was, but what does one do when faced with Death incarnate? Yet, she still found it digging into her, the feelings of helplessness and guilt burrowing through her.
“I see.” Hendrick’s words carried an unreadable tone and, with his face buried in the blankets, Luna wasn’t sure how he was reacting. She wanted very much to make it up to him, some way to apologize completely for being so afraid even though there was no way she could have been prepared for it. As thoughts swirled through Luna’s head, she remained silent, mostly because nothing came to mind she could say.
“Luna...” Hendrick said eventually. She turned her attention back towards him and watched as he raised his heads from the sheets, his red eyes reflecting the moonlight frighteningly. “I don’t want to hurt you by proximity... but I can’t leave.” He was choking back tears as he spoke. “I can’t think of being alone again; it hurts too much.” She tried to comfort him lightly with her voice, but to no avail. “I’m sorry. I’m so sorry.” He sniffed heavily, trying to keep his voice together for a few more moments. “May I stay?” A pleading tone bled from the words as tears would from eyes.
“Of course.”
“Thank you so much.” He nuzzled up next to her, pressing against her side with his tear stained face. In response, she closed her wing around him, bringing the two closer than they had been before. “It’s so hot here, and you're so comfortably cold,” he mumbled through a half asleep mouth, a childish tone perforating his words to the extent that Luna blinked in surprise. She had never heard that before... about anyone.
She felt a chill shoot through his body and an intense heat pool off him while he shifted to make himself more comfortable. “Thank you...” It seemed like he wanted to say more, but he couldn’t. His eyes closed and before too long, he had fallen asleep. Luna began to ponder about how someone could be so cold and so warm at the same time, but was thwarted as her mind became inexplicably fatigued. Unease began to pound through her system. She had only awoken a few minutes ago; why was she tired?
Against her will, sleep overtook her and she quickly found herself within her dreams. A quick look down told her she had once again taken the form of a human, almost exactly the same as she had in her previous dream. Expanding her gaze to her surroundings informed the now-bipedal Luna she was in a large library with tomes and tomes of knowledge sitting idly on the strong wooden boards making up the shelves around her.
Taken by awe for the massive collection of literature, Luna began to wander through the maze-like structure of the building. As she walked, she decided to take a look at one extremely large book sitting on the shelves. Pulling it from its resting place, she began to look through it. Each and every page was blank, yet she kept turning. She wasn’t sure why.
Letting her feet guide her, Luna continued to scour the book, looking for words. Just when she had given up, she raised her gaze to see she was among a collection of human children looking at her with fear-stricken eyes. Luna smiled comfortingly and sat down, motioning for the children to sit next to her.
Slowly, a few did. Each of them held a book tightly in their grasp and they started to read. Some of them appeared to be talking, but she couldn’t hear them. So, she smiled comfortingly and leaned against the wall, taking the moment to examine all the small ones.
There were about a dozen of them, all clustered in this back corner of the library, and each of them bore an odd marking on their forehead, some kind of red dot. She wanted to ask them what it was, but realized they wouldn’t hear her if she spoke, and she really didn’t want to break this comforting silence encasing her world of the library.
She smiled at the children until they all looked in one direction, an unseen noise catching their attention. Following their eyes, Luna watched as the man she had danced with, the man she now knew was most likely Hendrick, rounded the corner in a panic. He looked different, his tuxedo replaced with an old cloak and rough red shirt. He hurriedly lifted the children from Luna’s lap and began to usher them all somewhere.
It was clear he didn’t know her on sight, but he was guiding her all the same. The group found themselves out back and the man began to make shooing motions with his hands. Luna wanted very desperately to stay, but was dragged away with the rest of the children as they all ran into the night.
With a bittersweet smile, he turned away, pulling something from a shelf that glittered in the dim light of the building. The front door burst down and an explosion echoed through the air, shattering the silence that had encased Luna up until that moment. Another explosion. The device the man held shot backward and he lowered it again.
He managed one more explosion before tongues of flame shot forth and began to eat away at his clothes, burning the books all around him as he was destroyed by the hungry fire of the weapons wielded against him. Luna cried out, but found she was the only one doing so. When she was about to speak again, one of the children held a finger to her lips.
Now that she didn’t want to hear, she was forced to. The children made almost no noise as they ran away. Luna broke free, but the children kept going, hurrying away. The sickening crackle of fire filled her ears as she looked to the pyre that had taken the place of the library. She ran towards it, her feet pounding against the grass as she propelled herself toward the building.
When she met the flames, two towering beings emerged. Each of them were covered in black and carried large canisters on their back attached to rod-like devices in their hands. “Please,” Luna cried, unsure if they could hear her. “You have to help him!” The creatures looked at each other, shared a glance, and one drew something similar to what Hendrick had had. Slowly, the creature lowered it and pointed it at her forehead.
She didn’t know what it did, but she still felt the overpowering fear for it. Something told her running would be useless at this point. So, with the strongest face she could manage, she looked up at the thing and let tears roll down her face. When at last the explosion came, she went out like Hendrick had. Proudly. As the metal hit her forehead, it ended her dream, leaving a ghostlike touch as if it were still there..
Luna bolted awake in shock. Glancing down, she saw Hendrick asleep exactly how he had been when she drifted off. A flicker of movement caught her eye and Luna turned to see a candle had fallen from the bedside table and lit the flowers she brought alite, which in turn, threatened to burn the bed. Luna quickly put it out with her magic and looked back to Hendrick, whom shivered in response.
Deciding he deserved his sleep, Luna didn’t disturb him. It wouldn’t have helped anyone, anyhow.
Brilliant chapter, what with the introduction of Death himself and the mystery that surrounds Hendrick becoming ever deeper.
The insight into Luna's character seems to be spot on as well.
I feel so sad for Hendrick.
hmm.....I feel as if there is a book i should have read before getting to this point. Good story though, and as it progresses im going to try to figure out what this is reminding me of
Death isn't thwarted, and there are many who try, but that doesn't mean one should go meekly. Face it, head on, and smile. It freaks him out.
Death's no enemy, but some believe it is. Everyone fears what they don't understand.
And somehow, I kept expecting Don't Fear the Reaper to start playing. Maybe it's just me.
A wonderfully evocative chapter. And the questions haven't been answered. Yet.
*Welp* Romance... Will edit in response after reading.
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Don't read it. ARRRRGHHHH.
I have no idea if this is how I'm supposed to feel while writing Romance.
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But then how am I, to judge you with an iron fist? May the Gods be merciful to you when they smite you for your blashp... yeah, I have no idea where I was going with that one.
PLEASE tell me i got my comment in before Regidar
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Interesting chapter, even though I dislike romance, you handled it quite well, bravo. Also, if it is not considered a spoiler to you, I have to ask: about where, in the technological scale were humans before our protagonist came to Equestria?
Damn. So he was killed at a book-burning, delaying the enemy to give the kids a chance to get away. I guess the question now is, how far into the past or future did this take place, or is he from a distinct AU?
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Heck if I know. At least flamethrowers.
Yay, you updated it! MUST, READ, NOW!!!
Oh SHIT. What the hell was THAT?!!
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Silly author... not knowing his own story. So, hypothetically... this could be Halo?
Great chapter, with a great plot twist in the form of Death itself making an appearance.
1661148 Dude, get rid of your 'first' comment... making mention of being 'first' on this site can actually get you permanently banned!
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Yes. This could also be a story about racist teletubbies.
In other news I would appreciate it if you would delete your duplicate post.
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I swear to god, you people...
"First" comments will only get you banned, permanently or otherwise, if you post a comment consisting only of the word "FIRST", or something along those lines.
If the comment actually has any merit to it, nobody with the authority to ban users will care. At all.
Oh fuck. Death has decided, he will end in fire.
The question now is how they can make a deal with death to let him live
Inb4 Luna will offer herself but not before they have both found that they truly love each other.
Key word here is "offer". Hentich will never allow her to do it.
This shall be a interesting read
This was an amazing chapter, the bit at the end. With the candle falling and by a series of events could have cause hendrick to burn to death while sleeping. Seem awfully 'Final Destination' to me.
Never the less, Amazing as I said before.
Good chapter !
It's always strange for me to read "death himself", probably because I'm French… (Because "she" is considered female around here…)
But what is death's gender isn't really important!
Messing with Death himself? Not to smart.
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First comment, what first comment?
Seriously, they can ban you for that? Ouch. How does that work anyway? I've seen a slew of 'firsts' going on in multiple stories.
1662874 Yeah they can. And I admit I am not entirely sure how it happens... I think it is at the descreation of whichever moderator sees it; some don't give a dern and others might get ban hammer happy.
This is a rather strange story. I like it.
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About time you bled into my other stories Tyek.
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As has already been stated, you will only get banned for a FIRST post if that is all that it contains. If it has thought in it then you are pretty much safe from a ban unless you have broken some other rule.
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That is an interesting distinction. I don't suppose you know why that is?
As america is the melting pot I assume there must have been more people calling him male, so the fact that France considers Death a her is kinda peaking my interest. Maybe I'll do some research.
1663431 French is a language in which everything is either referred as she or he, and it's just happen that "mort", the French word for death, is a feminine one. (But thanks to that, Death is even more hilarious the French version of Discworld.)
And that also apply to animals name. So a pony always refereed as male, (even Rarity ) unless you refer to her as a mare or use her name. (And a bat is always refereed as female, even if it's Bruce Wayne! But like say the "Académie Française" itself: "it does nothing to taint his manhood, nor his platonic relationship with Robin.")
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Yea. I realized the male/female thing after I did some looking into it. Thanks for all the info though. ~The more you know~
And Discworld is amazing.
This is rather unique for a fimfic.
I daresay the first of its kind that was done well.
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While I hate to push my luck.
What exactly is it's 'type'?
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It's rare to find a story here that's done like you've done this one. By that, I mean stories with a human protagonist usually jump right on said human trying to explain his reasons or history to the ponies, to explain themselves, I guess. Those that don't usually have the human's history and reasons revealed solely to the reader, with the ponies learning out about it after much nitpicking and/or said history coming back with a vengeance.
Then we have this story, which does neither. Instead of learning his history due to narrative, we learn instead through cryptic wording, puzzling events, and accidental findings by the ponies themselves. Rarely is the protagonist developed through the eyes of another character in fanfiction. This might be the first fanfic I've read that has done so. I'm not too sure though, fanfiction tends to run together after awhile unfortunately.
But yeah, usually something I've only seen in professional works.
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Thank you for the compliment, it means a lot.
Is this a cross over with fahrenheit 451.
isn't Hendrik the name of the firemen in that movie.
must check, to google!
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If it is it's entirely on accident I assure you.
Hendrick is not a crossover from any story.
Wait so he's human now (I mean his body)? As in his body's been changed permanently back?
Or ...am I missing something?
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He takes his pony shape after Death lets go of him. if you reread it that's what it should say.
The part where he is human is in Luna's dreams. Like when she danced with him.
I don't know what I've read thus far but I think I like it. Have a stache.
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Why in all that is holy would Redigar comment on this?
I don't think you understand, he reads GOOD stories.
1666914 Oh, alright... okie that makes more sense. Thank yee for clearing that up... I think it was the dream bit that confused me... even though... it... was a dream. I am disappointed in myself...
The only bit of advise I have is to put in some more comedy once you get past the real serious parts, but other than that this story so far has been absolutely amazing and I encourage you to keep up the good work.
awsome
So Hendrick killed himself or something? With a gun? That's what I interpret from this chapter. Or did he save the children or people from a bombing? I'm too tired to understand it very well, but also, human Luna was killed by a gun too? I have no idea. Being tired sucks.
1668826 while modesty is always smiled upon, I find it irritating that you would so blatantly disregard your talents.
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Hendrick shot at a group of people who then proceeded to light him and his library on fire. And yes, human Luna was shot as well though how that affects the story is yet to be seen.
The cleansing fire will consume everything, and none shall escape it's grasp.
Don't fear the reaper, he isn't your foe,
Welcome him with open arms,
And burn in the everlasting light.
I don't even, good chapter Mr. Writer-Guy.
Love,
-Cortex Repository
P.S. I'd write a constructive comment but I'm too lazy to do it, so just think I did and we'll all be happy.
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Eeyup.
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Pretty much what I said when I first read the story, interesting piece of work indeed