This is a Power Lottery story about a guy who gets sent to the Crystal Empire before anyone from the show arrives not counting Sombra. How will the Equestrians react to the new King of the Crystal Empire who isn't even a pony.
amputates horns and wings ^^ for their arrogance and acquired knowledge of magic. I clapped with joy. perfect punishment for ignorant people. I hope the chrysalis will be able to glue all his memories together. great chapter. I wonder what revenge on solar tyranny he will choose.
I wonder how them ponies try to justify them being "offended"/"not deserving the punishment", when they were the ones to burst in and attack the sovereign and mess with his memories. One is a capital offence, other is a rather huge taboo, considering they claim they are all about "friendship and harmony". Guess we shall see later.
Excellent work as always. Well the M6 screwed up BIG thus time and may have doomed their homeland to a war that they cannot fight and win. So now Jekyll has his own Infinity Gauntlet huh? Nice can’t wait to see what he can do with it and hope he get as much of his memories back as he can. Looking forward to seeing how the M6 are handling their defeat, failure and what they lost. Hmm so the Caribou are here huh, question is are they like Fall of Equestria kind or a different kind? Either way can’t wait to see how Jekyll will handle things with them and what actions will be taken if they prove to be a threat or their ways are not to his liking. If next chapter might want a good way to do it, but if not I say electricity comes in two or three chapters later
When seeing twilight ask for the elements, I forgot what book I was reading; its been a while since I last read this ok?; so I was like "oh cool, the elements, since most people think they have some level of intelligence behind them, they will judge Jekyll and find him innocent and working in the benefit of harmony since, you know, he is trying to build a nation available to all races." Then I get to the end, and I'm like, "damn, thats rough buddy," then I read his reaction to getting HIS MEMORIES ERASED AND HIS MIND FRACTURED and I'm like, yea I'd probably react the same way.
I just want his memories to be restored so he can dominate the world and others eventually, maybe even go into evolution and ally with the dragons to really f over the ponies big time.
"They took what was important to me my memories and so now we will take what they find important...Remove the horns of the unicorns and wings of the pegasi but leave the Earth ponies be they are the only two who seemed to not wish to do this but there is one thing I will take from them that will also be taken from the others," I lifted my left gauntlet and twisted it till the back of my hand faced them while slots opened on the golden crystal gauntlet and pulsed my crystal magic pulling the crystals they wore from their jewelry. As the crystal artifacts drew closer they began to shrink becoming denser but smaller as to fit in the slots I had created for them. As each crystal locked into place I felt a pulse of magic as a tether to each girl snapped and wrapped around my arm and to my soul or that was my best guess.
Uh I hope I misread that and that he DOESN’T plan on raping them? They may have fucked up and I fully agree with the taking of wings and horns, if for nothing more than stopping them from being a threat again, but THAT is going a bit far even for me.
I think at this point he needs to call in Celestia and Luna as what just happened is an International Incident and no matter the gate on both sides this could lead to a rather huge war and I don’t think Equestria will have many allies once the truth gets out.
If I were in his shoes: I would ask (not demand) a reparation of 500,000 bits, that they serve a Year in a Crystal Empire jail (because they attack him in Empire territory) and the forfeiture of Equestrian held boarder lands between the Empire and Equestria.
10683983 What I meant was I was stealing the elements and the tether was their magic being torn from its connection with the elements. No rape for Jekyll only consensual.
MIGHT want to go back and change the wording then, it kinda gives off that insinuation
But seriously, I have to ask does he plan on holding JUST them responsible or Equestria as a whole? After all they were there REPRESENTING the Diarchy of Equestria and I doubt Celestia has the brass to Disavow them.
I enjoyed the Thanos reference you made. Also if your looking for names for the elements of harmony gauntlet, you could call it The Gauntlet of Harmony or The Gauntlet of Balance as it is a balance between good and evil, plus it would be a reference to Thanos wanting to "balance" the universe.
I like it, but I think my only gripe is the lack of conventional armaments. While magic is wonderful and all, it also develops into a crutch and pretty much stagnates development. You also run into the issues of Magic Nullification.
If it was me designing it I would have two Gun decks, second deck for Magic based weaponry and a First deck with retractable conventional munition based weaponry.
Maybe even a mix of bow and stern chase guns and some swivel guns on the main deck and both fore and aft castle.
Eh, if you want my advice? Stick closer to the current tech level of the Equestria he is in and make periodic but paced out upgrades.
If you jump to advanced weapons out the gate (or when he does electricity) it will be like painting a target on the empire with a giant neon lit billboard that says “ADVANCED TECH AND WEAPONS HERE, INVADE ME!”
I can’t really determine how advanced This world is, least in tech, but it looks to have stagnated in technology and is almost entirely reliant on magic. So just introducing Rifled Cannons as an example would seem to be a major leap in tech for them.
Edit: I am not saying don’t do it, just do it in a way that doesn’t make him and the Empire a target for Enemies and allies alike.
10684237 Thanks for the idea I actually rethought my idea and decided that black powder/gun powder weapons would be a better start along with one of those really old chainguns with a crank on the side
If you really want to make an out of the gate upgrade?
Two ideas: 1) find a way to make the early Gatling a peddle powered mechanism, its more versatile and would allow for more cover for the gunner.
2) if you intend to start with early Gun powder weapons, make use of both breach block weapons (like the martini Henry) and lever action weapons (like the Winchester or Henry rifles) as both are uncomplicated in mechanics and both have a very good fire rate for the eras they come from.
Other than that, maybe breach loading rifles cannons like the Armstrong Gun for field artillery/Defensive works and for use aboard airships.
Meh, the puckle gun isn’t all that good in action.
With the bulk of the ballista, it’s best use would be a mast deck boarding weapon using rope bolts. It would have to be on the fore castle with a decent rotation angle, only down side is the room it takes up.
Well first of all, love this new chapter. Second, you really got to spellcheck before posting. And thirdly, the airship design does look good, but WAY too advanced. I go with something similar to WW1 airship zeppelins, with cannons on them.
amputates horns and wings ^^ for their arrogance and acquired knowledge of magic. I clapped with joy. perfect punishment for ignorant people. I hope the chrysalis will be able to glue all his memories together. great chapter. I wonder what revenge on solar tyranny he will choose.
Not bad. Better ending than before and the punishment seemed appropriate for their transgression. Keep it up
I wonder how them ponies try to justify them being "offended"/"not deserving the punishment", when they were the ones to burst in and attack the sovereign and mess with his memories. One is a capital offence, other is a rather huge taboo, considering they claim they are all about "friendship and harmony".
Guess we shall see later.
I think this chapter was rather good. Because of the mind scrambling I would introduce electrity latter on
give the girls to the caribou as slaves
Excellent work as always. Well the M6 screwed up BIG thus time and may have doomed their homeland to a war that they cannot fight and win. So now Jekyll has his own Infinity Gauntlet huh? Nice can’t wait to see what he can do with it and hope he get as much of his memories back as he can. Looking forward to seeing how the M6 are handling their defeat, failure and what they lost. Hmm so the Caribou are here huh, question is are they like Fall of Equestria kind or a different kind? Either way can’t wait to see how Jekyll will handle things with them and what actions will be taken if they prove to be a threat or their ways are not to his liking. If next chapter might want a good way to do it, but if not I say electricity comes in two or three chapters later
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Their boned
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Agreed
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Maybe not that but that could be a backup plan
Accepting the "visitors" and their ways, I do not approve. The electricity Idea is good, it will knock down the unicorns a peg.
Alien power
If they does something that Jekyll don't like or stab him in the back, he's going to end their whole culture.
When seeing twilight ask for the elements, I forgot what book I was reading; its been a while since I last read this ok?; so I was like "oh cool, the elements, since most people think they have some level of intelligence behind them, they will judge Jekyll and find him innocent and working in the benefit of harmony since, you know, he is trying to build a nation available to all races." Then I get to the end, and I'm like, "damn, thats rough buddy," then I read his reaction to getting HIS MEMORIES ERASED AND HIS MIND FRACTURED and I'm like, yea I'd probably react the same way.
Not bad
I just want his memories to be restored so he can dominate the world and others eventually, maybe even go into evolution and ally with the dragons to really f over the ponies big time.
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I’m not planning on fully accepting the caribou ways and in the next few chapters an example will be made
Uh I hope I misread that and that he DOESN’T plan on raping them? They may have fucked up and I fully agree with the taking of wings and horns, if for nothing more than stopping them from being a threat again, but THAT is going a bit far even for me.
I think at this point he needs to call in Celestia and Luna as what just happened is an International Incident and no matter the gate on both sides this could lead to a rather huge war and I don’t think Equestria will have many allies once the truth gets out.
If I were in his shoes: I would ask (not demand) a reparation of 500,000 bits, that they serve a Year in a Crystal Empire jail (because they attack him in Empire territory) and the forfeiture of Equestrian held boarder lands between the Empire and Equestria.
But that’s just me.
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What I meant was I was stealing the elements and the tether was their magic being torn from its connection with the elements. No rape for Jekyll only consensual.
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MIGHT want to go back and change the wording then, it kinda gives off that insinuation
But seriously, I have to ask does he plan on holding JUST them responsible or Equestria as a whole? After all they were there REPRESENTING the Diarchy of Equestria and I doubt Celestia has the brass to Disavow them.
I enjoyed the Thanos reference you made. Also if your looking for names for the elements of harmony gauntlet, you could call it The Gauntlet of Harmony or The Gauntlet of Balance as it is a balance between good and evil, plus it would be a reference to Thanos wanting to "balance" the universe.
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Thanks for the tip.
No it won’t be just the 6 who are held responsible Celly will have to pay too.
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Heh np, context is everything
I can’t wait to see Celestias reaction to this, I really hope this pulls their heads out of their asses. But then again, I doubt it!
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What do you think of the airship design I’m planning on having it carry three magic cannons and multiple magic bombs.
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I like it, but I think my only gripe is the lack of conventional armaments. While magic is wonderful and all, it also develops into a crutch and pretty much stagnates development. You also run into the issues of Magic Nullification.
If it was me designing it I would have two Gun decks, second deck for Magic based weaponry and a First deck with retractable conventional munition based weaponry.
Maybe even a mix of bow and stern chase guns and some swivel guns on the main deck and both fore and aft castle.
But that’s just my design self coming out XD
Kill them all ! Fucking xenophobia pricks
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This is just the first design using tools available. Once I get to working on electricity I was thinking Tesla cannons, railguns, or coilguns
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Eh, if you want my advice? Stick closer to the current tech level of the Equestria he is in and make periodic but paced out upgrades.
If you jump to advanced weapons out the gate (or when he does electricity) it will be like painting a target on the empire with a giant neon lit billboard that says “ADVANCED TECH AND WEAPONS HERE, INVADE ME!”
I can’t really determine how advanced This world is, least in tech, but it looks to have stagnated in technology and is almost entirely reliant on magic. So just introducing Rifled Cannons as an example would seem to be a major leap in tech for them.
Edit: I am not saying don’t do it, just do it in a way that doesn’t make him and the Empire a target for Enemies and allies alike.
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Thanks for the idea I actually rethought my idea and decided that black powder/gun powder weapons would be a better start along with one of those really old chainguns with a crank on the side
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If you really want to make an out of the gate upgrade?
Two ideas:
1) find a way to make the early Gatling a peddle powered mechanism, its more versatile and would allow for more cover for the gunner.
2) if you intend to start with early Gun powder weapons, make use of both breach block weapons (like the martini Henry) and lever action weapons (like the Winchester or Henry rifles) as both are uncomplicated in mechanics and both have a very good fire rate for the eras they come from.
Other than that, maybe breach loading rifles cannons like the Armstrong Gun for field artillery/Defensive works and for use aboard airships.
What the 'Mane 6' did was a textbook definition of state sponsored terrorism, Jekyll could declare war on Equestria for that.
Well this was fun
And seems the king has a harmony powered infinity gauntlet lol
I'm enjoying this
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Also thought about puckle guns and massive fuckin ballista.
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Meh, the puckle gun isn’t all that good in action.
With the bulk of the ballista, it’s best use would be a mast deck boarding weapon using rope bolts. It would have to be on the fore castle with a decent rotation angle, only down side is the room it takes up.
Whens the next chapter
Well first of all, love this new chapter. Second, you really got to spellcheck before posting. And thirdly, the airship design does look good, but WAY too advanced. I go with something similar to WW1 airship zeppelins, with cannons on them.
I saw it coming and I was still surprised.
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What do you mean
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That infinity gauntlet ending after that epic line you know the one.
Me want to read more this is a really good story
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More is coming but I unfortunately deleted my new chapter and must rewrite it
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well I can't wait for the next chapter any estimated time on completion
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I remember some of it so it’ll probably be within a week or two unless something big comes up.
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ok out of curiosity how did you delete it
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I usually type on google docs and was deleting old files and accidentally deleted some newer files
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Lol I've done that a few time when I was in collage
Me:THEY DARE TRY TO TAKE AWAY HIS MEMORIES THE HEART AND SOUL OF A BEING BITCHS MUST HAVE LOST THEIR GOD DAMN MIND!!!!!!!!!👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿
So... the Xenomorph-like creatures... would it be more accurate to refer to them as Geomorphs?
I hope to see at least one reference to Army of Darkness.
YOU ABSOLUTE XENOPHOBIC HYPOCRITICAL FOOLS DARE TO MESS THE LIFE VERY SOUL OF A MAN, DON'T GET COCKY YOU LOWER LIFE FORMS!!!!!!!!!!!!