This is a Power Lottery story about a guy who gets sent to the Crystal Empire before anyone from the show arrives not counting Sombra. How will the Equestrians react to the new King of the Crystal Empire who isn't even a pony.
if your going to switch perspectives can you tell us by writing something like "Chrys POV". it will make it so much easier to read than read half the chapter then realizing I'm reading it as the wrong character then reread the section again so I can understand it.
not judging but why do you hate Shining? (also I hate him as well). that would be fucking hilarious if you can get her stuck in the changeling warrior's barracks.
if you are going to have something happen to shining then you might consider haveing it be because of cadence as that could help shake twilights faith in cadence
Nice and that was pretty badass on how the worm died, now time to deal with these fools and tell them that they and sunbut has no authority in the kingdom. And wonder what Shining will do when he turns into Gleaming and such
Okay, I get it. You hate shining. Perfectly fine. But with as often as he's been bashed here, continuing to do so is just beating a dead horse. I mean, you even have his own wife thinking so little of him that her excuse for marrying him is flimsy at best and just makes her a slut.
10703937 Not really sure how him being a background character has anything to do with it.
My point is a character was made to look weak and pathetic, viewed to be weak and pathetic by the other characters including his own family, for no other reason than to have a weak and pathetic character to bash on. I don't have anything against a bit of flack thrown at a character, even Shining. I've read plenty of fics that bash him around, and actually enjoyed it. The difference was in the "how" they bashed him. For instance, one portrayed him as at least competent by pony standards, but overly reliant on his shield, and someone makes a fool of him by figuring out a way around it and in turn proving his lack of ability everywhere else, and essentially led him into a downward spiral both in his own mental state and in his career. Believable and served a purpose without straying too far from the character established in canon.
What we have here is just bashing on a character for the sake of bashing on a character.
Holy crap! I just caught up and went to favorite...
BAM! New chapter.
if your going to switch perspectives can you tell us by writing something like "Chrys POV". it will make it so much easier to read than read half the chapter then realizing I'm reading it as the wrong character then reread the section again so I can understand it.
That's what she said
not judging but why do you hate Shining? (also I hate him as well). that would be fucking hilarious if you can get her stuck in the changeling warrior's barracks.
Doitdoitdoitdoitdoit!
if you are going to have something happen to shining then you might consider haveing it be because of cadence as that could help shake twilights faith in cadence
Nice and that was pretty badass on how the worm died, now time to deal with these fools and tell them that they and sunbut has no authority in the kingdom. And wonder what Shining will do when he turns into Gleaming and such
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I can see that happening
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Indeed
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Yes Shiny Hiney, thy shalt be the playthings of the hive!!! Muwahahahahahahahahaha.
Okay, I get it. You hate shining.
Perfectly fine. But with as often as he's been bashed here, continuing to do so is just beating a dead horse.
I mean, you even have his own wife thinking so little of him that her excuse for marrying him is flimsy at best and just makes her a slut.
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Well he is background character with how often he appeared.
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Not really sure how him being a background character has anything to do with it.
My point is a character was made to look weak and pathetic, viewed to be weak and pathetic by the other characters including his own family, for no other reason than to have a weak and pathetic character to bash on.
I don't have anything against a bit of flack thrown at a character, even Shining. I've read plenty of fics that bash him around, and actually enjoyed it. The difference was in the "how" they bashed him. For instance, one portrayed him as at least competent by pony standards, but overly reliant on his shield, and someone makes a fool of him by figuring out a way around it and in turn proving his lack of ability everywhere else, and essentially led him into a downward spiral both in his own mental state and in his career.
Believable and served a purpose without straying too far from the character established in canon.
What we have here is just bashing on a character for the sake of bashing on a character.