This is a Power Lottery story about a guy who gets sent to the Crystal Empire before anyone from the show arrives not counting Sombra. How will the Equestrians react to the new King of the Crystal Empire who isn't even a pony.
10487698 If you wanted to do this I would think it would work well with the idea from the manga Kujibiki Tokushou Musou Harem-ken, where doing only doing some things give him a chance to earn more powers, other then that i like how the story is going and would like to see me.
Hmm not bad thus far looks to have potential and I’m looking forward to seeing where this will lead to and how thus will turn out. Keep up the good work and hope to see more soon
Quick fight, but understandable. Sombra is only a threat due to his Crystalmancy, without it he is just a jumped up Unicorn/Umbra hybrid.
Technomagic is gonna be interesting, though how useful it will be will depend on what Version of it he got.
Dark energy manipulation is gonna be a double edged sword, the ponies of Equestria will just see Dark Magic no matter how he has/will use it.
Crystal manipulation is also interesting, while it has bad connotations, it can me used to quickly fix the Empires Buildings and likely be used to find valuable energy crystals and such too.
10488135 You have interesting ideas. I am thinking of having the technomagic power skill start as basic but as it is used more and more Jekyll will be able to use higher levels of power after mastering the current level.
Interesting enough I think I'll stick around and see where this goes. You could use an editor if you want to bother boosting the quality of how things flow, but I suppose it's good for what it is.
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If you wanted to do this I would think it would work well with the idea from the manga Kujibiki Tokushou Musou Harem-ken, where doing only doing some things give him a chance to earn more powers, other then that i like how the story is going and would like to see me.
The fight seemed a bit too easy to me but otherwise good start, I’m looking forward to seeing more.
So.....he's a nugget
Hmm not bad thus far looks to have potential and I’m looking forward to seeing where this will lead to and how thus will turn out. Keep up the good work and hope to see more soon
Looking good so far keep it up
Quick fight, but understandable. Sombra is only a threat due to his Crystalmancy, without it he is just a jumped up Unicorn/Umbra hybrid.
Technomagic is gonna be interesting, though how useful it will be will depend on what Version of it he got.
Dark energy manipulation is gonna be a double edged sword, the ponies of Equestria will just see Dark Magic no matter how he has/will use it.
Crystal manipulation is also interesting, while it has bad connotations, it can me used to quickly fix the Empires Buildings and likely be used to find valuable energy crystals and such too.
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You have interesting ideas. I am thinking of having the technomagic power skill start as basic but as it is used more and more Jekyll will be able to use higher levels of power after mastering the current level.
<<<<<<<< this is good for combat
Interesting enough I think I'll stick around and see where this goes.
You could use an editor if you want to bother boosting the quality of how things flow, but I suppose it's good for what it is.
Quick question is both his arms robotic or just one?
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the fuck
"Yay I was their version of TV" I love it