This is a Power Lottery story about a guy who gets sent to the Crystal Empire before anyone from the show arrives not counting Sombra. How will the Equestrians react to the new King of the Crystal Empire who isn't even a pony.
Of course the ponies being xenophobic idiots and think their the best race of all, well time to teach them a painful lesson in humility and a good dose of reality check on where they truly stand here. Great choice of armor here and cant wait to see what his weapons will be
Cadence waited at least five minutes before speaking again and what she decided horrified me. She turned to each of us with a small frown and ended on Barb.
10539784 Honestly I'd expect that kind of brutal put down from sombra. Honestly the guy could have just kicked the ever loving shit out of cadence and I'd be fine with it, but straight up amputation of multiple limbs comes off as extremely out of character and far to brutal for what I was seeing in him. Like he goes from a nice guy doing his best to a straight up asshole for pretty much no real reason. Boi went wayyyyyyy off the deep end.
10539826 Thank you for your input I am re writing the fight but am going to keep the removal of the sword arm because having two magical weapons will be cool
10539901 Maybe amputation of only one limb? Or maybe just amputation of a horn, even if they don't grow back or at least not painlessly and fast like hair?
after I saw the pic I liseind to https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bzPuK1vib_c
Grey Knight - check
Emperor class titan - [?]
On the serious note I can totally see Tomb Kings style constructs in
Crystal Army
I bet Equestrians are NOT prepared for what they signed in for with that (rather xenophobic sounding) conquest threat/cHaLlEnGe...
Awesome
good luck surviving,Candence!
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Shes dead
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What did you expect they think their the best thing ever, NOT!
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Very good choice of song
Of course the ponies being xenophobic idiots and think their the best race of all, well time to teach them a painful lesson in humility and a good dose of reality check on where they truly stand here. Great choice of armor here and cant wait to see what his weapons will be
What did she say?
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Well she spoke to barb who sends dragon fire mail so she wanted to send mail
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Oh i thought it something else is wrong but i just get the meaning that's all
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Honestly I'd expect that kind of brutal put down from sombra. Honestly the guy could have just kicked the ever loving shit out of cadence and I'd be fine with it, but straight up amputation of multiple limbs comes off as extremely out of character and far to brutal for what I was seeing in him.
Like he goes from a nice guy doing his best to a straight up asshole for pretty much no real reason.
Boi went wayyyyyyy off the deep end.
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no what I mean is equestria is changing fast
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Thank you for your input I am re writing the fight but am going to keep the removal of the sword arm because having two magical weapons will be cool
10539901
Maybe amputation of only one limb?
Or maybe just amputation of a horn, even if they don't grow back or at least not painlessly and fast like hair?
10539901
Huge fan of your work
When is part 8?
blood for the blood god
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Skulls for the skull throne
You really need to use commas in the dialogues. And more commas in general.
Space marines
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for the emprea