Enjoying the story. It's when I notice little things like these, I point them out as I enjoy it when this happens with my own stories so I can fix them:
Anon looked at his sheet and smiled, "Your barbarian have successfully slain the goblin chief. With that, the remaining goblins and goblinoids flee the camp in mass terror and confusion"
Pretty sure you mean has there.
"Sorry." The mare chuckled, "I just got so excited that I wanted all introductions out of the way so we could get 5o the most interesting part!"
And somehow we got a number instead of a letter. Only Pinkie Pie.
"Yeah yeah, semantics mom. I'm just saying Equestria needs a bone, and Daddy can provide it. Just like in those mangas he's read!" She said too cheerily.
I can only guess what those are... And I can imagine Twilight's reactions to this comment.
What are mangas? Those might be the new knowledge on the intercourse activities! Er... does it also has that kind of knowledge? I mean, if you are OK to share... I hope those tomes come with a new fashion style never seen in Equestria.
Pinkie gasped in surprise before letting out a sigh, "You're right. I'm too dummy thick to be a spy anyway. The clap of my cutie flanks always alerts the guards." Everypony stopped and gave her a strange look.
'To defeat an enemy, you must know them. Not simply their battle tactics, but their history, philosophy and art. It is the fundamental should you seek victory. '
Looks like Celestia and Luna's father share the same ideas as Thrawn does.
I really enjoy these kinds of lite hearted HiEs, specifically because the human character isn't a self-deprecating coward that the story shits on for "laughs".
This was a epic funny and chill chapter I can't wait to see where this goes next (no rush).this had me cracking up at the references and jokes. I also love Evie she's adorable I can't wait to see the new baby I can't wait to see who is next.
yes.Yes.YEs.BY THE GAMING AND HENTAI GODS YYEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»
Pinkie gasped in surprise before letting out a sigh, "You're right. I'm too dummy thick to be a spy anyway. The clap of my cutie flanks always alerts the guards." Everypony stopped and gave her a strange look.
*in a gruff voice* hmm Metal Gear?? What's that?
" Ugh, You're killing me Smalls ." Anon and Evie said at the same time. They turned to each other and fist-bumped before pointing fingers, "Ayeeee."
This is bad I went Eyyyyyy before I finished the sentence.
Enjoying the story. It's when I notice little things like these, I point them out as I enjoy it when this happens with my own stories so I can fix them:
Pretty sure you mean has there.
And somehow we got a number instead of a letter. Only Pinkie Pie.
I can only guess what those are...
And I can imagine Twilight's reactions to this comment.
What are mangas? Those might be the new knowledge on the intercourse activities!
Er... does it also has that kind of knowledge? I mean, if you are OK to share...
I hope those tomes come with a new fashion style never seen in Equestria.
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Thanks.
Jesus dude. What a crackfic. At least it's readable.
Good god its weird to see this from the other side...
Praise the Sun!
>:3
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Yaassssss this is a lot of fun to read
You share the same type of humor as me. I was even going "Ayyyyyyyye" before i even read it. I love this so much, I lost it at the Escanor moment.
You know it pink snake.
And OverWatch and seven deadly sins reference nice
Looks like Celestia and Luna's father share the same ideas as Thrawn does.
I get this is supposed to be clop with plot, but honestly the plot is getting rather interesting.
I really enjoy these kinds of lite hearted HiEs, specifically because the human character isn't a self-deprecating coward that the story shits on for "laughs".
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Bubble butt
This was a epic funny and chill chapter I can't wait to see where this goes next (no rush).this had me cracking up at the references and jokes. I also love Evie she's adorable I can't wait to see the new baby I can't wait to see who is next.
The chapter ended.
WHO DECIDED THAT!
When Luna walks in on them and sees a male for the first time in a thousand years
Amazing chapter. Well done.
I about lost my shit at "Who decided that?". Fantastic job. π
https://youtu.be/tygbw5wz9-s
Wait a minute derpy has two daughters and
Magical Incemination apparently it's a life long payment
Then derpy is freakishly Rich right
Nice. B^)
Escanor must be very proud rn
Because he literally fucking the "sun"
Hehe
You know what i mean
Fuckskanor is here
This is a fun story, my m8. Keep it up!
Thanks for the chapter
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she could of got lucky and won a lotto or had twins or somthing
*first chapter*
Oh hum, humor is not bad.
*second chapter*
βKurokamiβ
Fuck no.
I came for the lewds, but now staying for plot!
yes.Yes.YEs.BY THE GAMING AND HENTAI GODS YYEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»
When are you going to continue their story and if you do make it and I don't know what am I saying lol
This is great!! Can't wait for more!!
*in a gruff voice* hmm Metal Gear?? What's that?
This is bad I went Eyyyyyy before I finished the sentence.
I would like to read more of this please
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In progress.
Looks Like someone watched or read too many Bee movies
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Yes!
Did they seriously just use an escannor quote in a clop story?
I freaken love this thus far!
You get seal of approval from imperial inqusition of God Emperor.
Annon makes humanity proud
Aka
This is amazing
Katrina....
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Is this who you mean?
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;)
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Confused me at first since in canon it is spelled Catrina.
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Damn... haven't seen that women in a while.
How would this effect the Changelings I wonder...
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Changelings that have a hard time increasing the size of their army? That sounds intriguing to see.
Neeeeed mooooore