A young man with a horrible past and nothing left to lose commits suicide. Through mysterious means and for an unknown purpose, he is reborn as a pony in Equestria. He now has to face the new world and, most importantly, himself.
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Beautiful chapter. I look forward to more
I wonder how long he needs to learn until he can speak or at least write.
My theory in Celestias place would be a familie step into the forest but only 1 foal left alive...
Great chapter
i like it, great job
Can he still speak English ?
I honestly want him to go Semi-evil, if for nothing more than to be different.
I am fully expecting Celestia to get more and more afraid of him and thus compare him more and more to Sombra and thus doing something to betray him leading to his turning on the rest of the pony’s
Also wicked idea on how Sombra became what he did!
10511575
But school and the education system is complete shit.
10511575
Definitely. But as 10512130 pointed out, the educational system in almost every country sucks complete and utter ass.
10511593
Thank you, fixed.
10511612
Thank you! As for speaking, he can't. But he can definitely write.
10511632
Thank you!
10511659
Thank you, too!
10511875
At some point, he could.
10512009
The idea of how Sombra became evil isn't mine, it's from the official Sombra origins comic.
I'm hoping this is the same universe as the ones flames in. Flame meets the feral. No one but them can understand what's being said. If not can you make that an unofficial what if story
10512140
Official Origin Comic? Are you talking about the IDW one? I thought that wasn't really Official or Canon?
Besides, in the IDW version he is all but called a Umbrum (Shadow Pony) with a Predilection towards Dark Magic due to his Species, Hsi fall was a Combination of Abuse (physical and Mental) from Amore and the Crystal Heart hurting him near constantly due to it's own magic or at least that's how I interpreted it.
10513518
Yeah, that comic.
I believe Sombra wouldn't turn evil if Amore helped him right away instead of letting him be basically tortured each year. Instead, she just spouted nonsense about choosing destiny while she actively pushed him towards evil by allowing him to be hurt so much. I'd be rightfully angry if someone did this to me, that's for sure.
10513209
Unfortunately, all my stories are in their own separate timelines/universes.
10513625
All things point to her knowing too, from what I can deduce she refused to let him leave the Empire each time they had the Crystal Faire. I am honestly surprised he didn’t die from the concentration of polarized energy contrary to his own nature.
I really hope you do something different other than the sad obliteration he got in canon -_-
10513625
Not even as a 1 shot? I understand anyway
10513635
I'm not sure if Sombra is going to be in this story, but perhaps.
oooooh, I want more!
‘It’ implies that only one thing did not happen.
10514038
You'll certainly get more.
10515592
Ah, that's why I thought the sentence was wrong but couldn't figure out why. Thank you, fixed now!
The first steps towards a better life are taken. If he choices to accept a peaceful and fullfillment driven path.
When do we get to learn the dark arts?
-Making the bright room dimmer - [Nightdark]
-Walking while the shadow hide oneself - [Shadow Walk]
-Controlling the shadows to tickel enemys into giving up their Cookies - [Shadow Tickels]
Stuff like that