A young man with a horrible past and nothing left to lose commits suicide. Through mysterious means and for an unknown purpose, he is reborn as a pony in Equestria. He now has to face the new world and, most importantly, himself.
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All around great chapter! Luna missed a lot, good we have others to fill in the gaps.
Sad that I can't think of a singel nations caring for orphans that mutch, a wasted ressource for sure.
Great to have a less dramatic chapter, the high strung nature started to wear on the nerves.
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I don't mean to imply that this particular narrative is impossible. Furthermore, some of these issues may have directly contributed to his other disorders, which would make sense. What I'm attempting to say is that the way you explained it feels somewhat off. Certain aspects need to be shown rather than simply told, especially when trying to evoke emotions. The impact would be more profound if we were only made aware of his depression and rage initially, and then later shown the extent of his madness through flashbacks or monologues.
When you just randomly keep adding more "issues" with little to no context it just feels as if you were filling a list and checking boxes of how "fucked up" you can make your character it gives a sense of
insignificance. As if you where trying to say he is broken but wanted to make it worse so you added random demeaning adjetive and problems to make it worse. If you have even half of the issues you implied your protagonist have then each of them would be astronomically hard to solve. Even worse it would make un Mc unbearable to enjoy because he would be too broken to be understood much less reason with.
English isn't my first language, and I don't think I'm expressing myself accurately.
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Ah, I see. Yeah, that's fair.
Damb!
His Education about Equestria is Sh×t!