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Elu
Just a guy writing fanfics. I also draw and make music, which I try to include in my stories as well. They/them.
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Here we go again! I always love these types of stories because I'd love to be the one in the story who gets reborn
I'm not going to lie that has got to be the dumbest reasoning I have ever heard for committing suicide by shooting yourself in the heart instead of your head.
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That may be so, but there's some logic to it, even if the said logic isn't really solid.
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True, it just calls into question this kids intelligence.
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Or the state of mind. After all, he's far from being perfectly reasonable - "depression realism" phenomenon notwithstanding - and thus prone to making wrong assumptions and conclusions. I had depression once, and I know it well enough.
10372160
It was surprising, but honestly I've read of work place accidents of people getting 6 foot rebar poles through the brain and living, hell even the guy who stuck his head in a partial accelerator lived.
Great intro, can't wait to find out why he came out of a flower thing :D
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I'm sure there are hundreds of cases were stuff like that happened but at the end of the day 99% of the time if something goes through your brain you're dead. But shooting yourself in the heart... let's imagine you know exactly where your heart is the chances of that bullet hitting it is more unlikely than likely. The bullet will most likely veer off course or hit a bone and a slew of other things.
Admit it, we all want this to happen to us...minus the suicide aspect, I’m looking forward to reading more of this
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Never have I ever wanted to become or be born as a pony. I honestly find the notion of bit disturbing.
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I'd honestly like to be a magical unicorn. Because magic. Even simple telekinesis is pretty useful and better than having hands.
i wonder if this could mean he is more in touch with magic then others and as such it boosts him more?
That's one way to start your new life.
A pony name
Slave Knight Gael
Bloody hell...
Is that a attempt at 'who can have the tougher start'? 
Thats one crazy start 
Why not go out in glory
Fertilizer bomb to take down a corrupt political person.
This kind of death is just pointless
Bad chapter. I hope the next is a lot better.
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Bombing requires preparations, skills, equipment, and plenty of luck. You wouldn't really let anyone who looks like the protagonist approach a politician. Besides, taking out some lower politicians wouldn't really do much.
Dont think reborn really fits if your not 'born' hes just... Transformed i guess?
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Technically, he was reborn. Just not traditionally.
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Adrenaline boosted him, not magic. The protagonist may not be exceptionally strong now, but when he does fight, he goes all out. And so far, he's not even aware of magic.
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I cannot agree more.
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I can't just steal a famous name, as good as this one is. But the protagonist is certainly not a slave and he's not knighted.
10381827
You're not denying that he is similar to Gael.
He may not have the name or the title and we all know he is not a slave.
But there is a chance he can make the armor and cape.
I hope he scares luns with his dreams and his eyes if there dead enough
Im curiouse if Equestria can cure his souls pain...
how is he going to react to this? more plz
Love the look and music
Damn fine chapter!
Im hooked 
This is were the story starts for me.
This is a take i never read before in Fimfiction
I look forward to more updates. A clear like after this Chapter 
Is that supposed to be ‘‘(...) of whom that pony could be’’?
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Like that?
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What is ‘‘her horn not having it’’ supposed to mean here?
The ‘no shape’ part confuses me.
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Fixed, thank you.
I half expected him to stay with Celestia, since he only seams to trust her.
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He doesn't actually trust her. He made a gamble and won a roof over his head and some food. If he could stay away somehow, he likely would.
Interessting all male Orphans?
Will he have a personal care taker?
Did Celestia see what he did after he reached his room?!
Great chapter! Well done
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Okay, thanks for clarifying that.
Also, if I look at the size of the bed, I get the feeling that this isn't a single pony room. So when he wakes up the next day, he will most likely be surrounded by other foals, all of them much to close for his comfort.
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since we were told that the last pony like our mc was apparently sombra maby celestia has decidid to take a big intrest in the upbringing of the mc? it could just be they are giving him alot of space so he doesnt have to interact if he doesnt want to as we dont know the state of other rooms so maby the big bed and bathroom is to allow for his isolation from others?
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No, not all male. There are colts and fillies alike there. I would certainly mention if it were all-male.
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The bed size is just for comfort plus maybe sleepovers, but every foal gets his own dorm. Privacy is pretty important, all that.
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Every foal gets an individual room. Besides, Celestia thinks he's a Feral, there's no way she would put him in a room with other foals.
Pretty sure Celestia will monitor him trough Pony and Magic. Just like Twilight
Excellent Chapter!
Question, will their be maids in the next chapter by any chance?
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The Royal Orphanage does have staff, but they don't do everything that foals can do themselves.
Excellent story so far! Love how you portray a character that can't escape his depression with death, meaning he will have to confront it eventually. Can't wait for more :D
The odd thing was that this chapter was not added to the unread chapter count, despite being unread.
bowl?
Is that supposed to be ‘‘didn't miss the cookie dipping’’ ? As the sentence is phrased now, it implies that she simply distanced herself from performing the act with no regrets.
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Fixed everything except "had had". As far as I'm aware, it's correct.
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I double checked and you are correct. I have now removed that part from my comment.
10408022
James while John had had had had had had had had had had had a better effect on the teacher.
Are you going to finish this story
learning is fun
way
Beautiful chapter. I look forward to more
I wonder how long he needs to learn until he can speak or at least write.
My theory in Celestias place would be a familie step into the forest but only 1 foal left alive...
Great chapter
i like it, great job