A young man with a horrible past and nothing left to lose commits suicide. Through mysterious means and for an unknown purpose, he is reborn as a pony in Equestria. He now has to face the new world and, most importantly, himself.
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I half expected him to stay with Celestia, since he only seams to trust her.
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He doesn't actually trust her. He made a gamble and won a roof over his head and some food. If he could stay away somehow, he likely would.
Interessting all male Orphans?
Will he have a personal care taker?
Did Celestia see what he did after he reached his room?!
Great chapter! Well done
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Okay, thanks for clarifying that.
Also, if I look at the size of the bed, I get the feeling that this isn't a single pony room. So when he wakes up the next day, he will most likely be surrounded by other foals, all of them much to close for his comfort.
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since we were told that the last pony like our mc was apparently sombra maby celestia has decidid to take a big intrest in the upbringing of the mc? it could just be they are giving him alot of space so he doesnt have to interact if he doesnt want to as we dont know the state of other rooms so maby the big bed and bathroom is to allow for his isolation from others?
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No, not all male. There are colts and fillies alike there. I would certainly mention if it were all-male.
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The bed size is just for comfort plus maybe sleepovers, but every foal gets his own dorm. Privacy is pretty important, all that.
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Every foal gets an individual room. Besides, Celestia thinks he's a Feral, there's no way she would put him in a room with other foals.
Pretty sure Celestia will monitor him trough Pony and Magic. Just like Twilight
Excellent Chapter!
Question, will their be maids in the next chapter by any chance?
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The Royal Orphanage does have staff, but they don't do everything that foals can do themselves.
Excellent story so far! Love how you portray a character that can't escape his depression with death, meaning he will have to confront it eventually. Can't wait for more :D
The odd thing was that this chapter was not added to the unread chapter count, despite being unread.
bowl?
Is that supposed to be ‘‘didn't miss the cookie dipping’’ ? As the sentence is phrased now, it implies that she simply distanced herself from performing the act with no regrets.
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Fixed everything except "had had". As far as I'm aware, it's correct.
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I double checked and you are correct. I have now removed that part from my comment.
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James while John had had had had had had had had had had had a better effect on the teacher.
Are you going to finish this story
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I hope so Update is there
Good chapter, I love world building.
In the shower but did you mean hadn't instead of haven't?
No matter what he will choice to become, everyone can find a use. A farmer, a care taker, a breeding Stud or a row of other uses. Noone is useless. In the worst case scenario he sooner or later becomes food for fauna or flora.
Our unnamed main character in the dining hall scene: