• Member Since 17th Mar, 2018
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Azvameth Rose


25 years old, not much left to say. I can say that I love to write and draw. And I hope everyone enjoys the stories I have to tell.

Comments ( 8 )

Nice progression here. Nice story.

So rarely do I get to a story before it becomes popular, I find myself with all the luck today!

Good story! Chrysalis just surrendering like this is great simply for the tension she adds just by being herself. I was taken aback slightly when this suddenly turned anthro. Perhaps it was mentioned and I simply overlooked it. I also think that the prologue should have been first person Celestia, but that’s me.
I do like how many of Chrysalis’ thoughts are from a military perspective. I can’t wait for her to meet Twilight, that should be fun!

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sorry it was anthro from the start. I maybe I wasn't clear in the depictions.

Jealous little twilight..
I love it so far keep em coming!

Great chapter here, maybe add some personal breakers for all the characters though so that we know who we’re following when you decide to change the perspective.

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