• Published 16th May 2020
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Fast Tap´s School Tale - Fast Tap



Fast Tap, a purple pony is comming to assist to the school of friendship on the opening day, where he will meet some cool friends, but the problem comes when the idea of do the things by the book, and makes the start of the adventure of Fast

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Epilogue: there's more...

Well, this story is over, but there are more stories that I want to tell you, like the time Fast went on an expedition, or when it was a vacation and Fast spent it worried, but who I want to fool, I'm really that pony, who has lived all that

THE END

Comments ( 6 )

Alright, my first take of reading this story has shown me that this was either written in a short amount of time or rather in a longer span of time. The style of writing needs to be revised and additionally I recommend getting an editor before submitting the chapters you submit, I like the premise of this story, though I am sure that this could've been written out better, also I noticed that all of these chapters were submitted on the same day? was this done on purpose, or due to the fact that you wrote the story ahead of time and decided to upload every chapter as soon as you joined the website. Nonetheless, I like the story and would like to see more of the stories you decide to upload to this website.

Although i'm a bit late, good luck and welcome to FIM!

On this mini journey you will meet the Fast Belt, the ground horse with a huge smile and the best knowledge of numerous things, but much more on how to be a good boy. We need https://www.bestdissertation.com/buying-research-paper.html now. He goes to the opening of a friend's school and meets his first friends, and he will do anything to keep them united and safe, especially with the problem of the boring book that will be the beginning of the adventure that Fast Tap will have

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