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Our hero Fluttershy is under seige by dark forces from the unending realms of Nightmare. Can she stave off the terrors that lurk within the depths of her own sleepless mind? A short story from the filly who brought you My Little Patriot: Freedom is Magic.

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Lan

Lan #1 · Oct 3rd, 2012 · 1 · ·

This could have been much better. I jumped into it thinking that it was just a dark fic. At the line, "Grabbing her trusty spork, Fluttershy performed an ancient South Amareican rain dance to drive the creatures off in a cloud of acid-rain," I had to go back and check the category tags. There's a reason Dark and Random don't work. After reading that line, it began to feel like more of a joke, which just doesn't go well with Dark. Towards the end, it even lost the "humor" and became serious. This story would have been better without the "Random" parts.