A guy's quiet life is suddenly turned upside down when six colorful ponies crash into his life, literally. How will he handle it when these ponies, start turning into humans? Can he hide them? Can he help them?
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Wait, so is it Daniel or Delsin?
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Haha, sorry, I was going to call him Delsin, but I changed my mind. Thought I had purged the old name, thank you for pointing that out.
This is pretty good so far!
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Thanks a bunch!
Need more!
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And more you will get!
so, shot in the dark (totally not) purple light is Bookhorse, orange sneeze is Cowpony, yellow scaredy cat is obvious, and smack to the head has to be the Sonic wannabe (please note none of this is meant to be insulting just trying to make it less obvious to anyone who comes across this comment before reading the chapter)
wow...… what a cliff hanger.
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Don don dooooooooon!!!
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so...………. whens the next chapter??
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I'm finishing the latest one now, then I simply need to proof read it. So I would say, maybe 20 minutes? Soon at least!
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yay.
This was a chill getting to known the people around him which was awesome.
I haven't gotten to chapter 2 yet, but I bet Rainbow knocked him out.
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ya or maybe AJ
Wrong "to/two/too" there, twice. Here, it should be "too", with the double-'o'.
Not as in 007, because that's actually zeroes people call 'o's because that's what the number resembles - and is probably based upon, I dunno - but an actual double 'o' after the 't'. "Too late", "too idiotic", "too noisy", etc. Y'know?
"Thanks", with an 's'. The word is often pluralised, possibly because it's often an act someone does ("he thanks his helper", similar to "he drills into the ground"). It's rarely used in the singular, often when someone tells you to do it ("you must thank him!").
"Yea"? That's awfully archaic; not many young adults or younger would use it, or even really know of it. These days, it's only really used in "yea or nay" voting. You're probably looking for the slang word "yeah", which has a 'h' at the end.
Again, "too". That's now two times you used "to" instead of "too".
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Thank you, I always have problems with that since English is not my native language I am happy to have that one explained. I'm always unsure about that word.
wagered? I'm not sure what you meant here but I don't think that was it.
That should be rang though when taken in context it should probably read like this (note
wordsare words to be removed and change is like this)You should either replace to with too or just remove it.
Replace were with either was or is
the sort of place
Should capitalize
Replace with pack myself a lunch
This should say to take home with you
I'm Michael, the Handyman... in real life. Why do I always identify as the side characters?