A guy's quiet life is suddenly turned upside down when six colorful ponies crash into his life, literally. How will he handle it when these ponies, start turning into humans? Can he hide them? Can he help them?
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man. more gambles then las vages. talk about hard.
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I think it was important to show it's a major decision, and not one that was easy to make.
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i'll say.
"I nodded, exactly.
Don't you mean this; I nodded. "Exactly,?
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I do, and it is corrected. Thank you for pointing it out. ^^
I don't mind word colors if anything makes more since to do it that way and less confusing sometimes when it's multiple people talking it confuses the hell out of the reader is when we don't know who or what talking so either or your choice my friend.
Loving it so far can't wait to read the next chapter!👍
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Thank you for your input. That means a lot, did you have trouble knowing who was talking in this one, or was it easy enough to follow?
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Yes so far so good but AJ was hard to distinguish from the rest but so far so good.
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Okay, I’ll keep that in mind. Thanks.
For the most part, it wasn't too tough to tell who was talking. I know I usually use dialogue tags more often when there's a bunch of characters in the same scene than when there's only two or three to help minimize confusion of who's talking.
This was a awesome/chill chapter but I like the color version better. I wonder when they will start changing.
No. She ignored it.
I.E: Is the bird in the hand/hoof worth giving up for the two that might be in the bush.
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me too
I'm having some very cringetastic cringes just imagining what the girls would/will do when/if they find out about bronies and find some of the more *clears throat* 'mature' *coughs* stories online. Cringerific lol
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I just had a meta as heck thought.
what if right now, The mane 6 are stuck on a farm on our world with a guy named Daniel
and he is showing them this website and they are reading these comments.
(I smoked a lot of weed today)