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Filthy-Casual


English just isn't my strong suit.

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Not bad. You're the second person to write a Frostpunk/MLP crossover that I've seen. Your off to an okay start. And I'm guessing World's End is the name of your city in the game. Fitting. Mine's Snowbourne. I'm curious to see how this plays out.

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Thank you for the feedback! Funny thing is that the name of the city was a place holder since im actually pretty bad with names but when submiting it I realized I hadnt changed it so I guess I'm just gonna have to go along with it.

By the symptoms, Celestia died of Tuberculosis
Then again, it's your story. I was just pointing it out.
Love the read. It's a good start and set up to why the world is freezing.

You have a great start to this story, please don't let it die, there are very few stories related to this topic :raritywink:

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Hi, the author here! Im glad you guys like the story so far. Trust me its not dead, I've just been really busy with work and honestly cant find the time to write. Hopefully, Ill be able to upload something soon.

"I have grave news Luna"
"W-what is it dearest sister?"
"I’m dying."

Literally grave news indeed.
...I'll see myself out.


Good premise so far.

Although I had expected Celestia would spend the day making plans with Luna how to save her little ponies, after she said "No. I must explain why this is happening before I... depart."
It seems now Luna has to figure something out on her own (or maybe ask Twilight).

I loved my sister. I had just reunited with her only to lose her in such a short amount of time, it was unfair.

Just for reference: How short exactly? When does this story takes place (which season)?

There was only one solution to this problem and that was to await the arrival of a new alicorn

To increase your chances consider looking for handsome stallions... ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

I smile warmly at her and look back at the scroll "Were going to need to build a city, a large city."

Just a city? Nothing else?
I kinda expected her to mention something about a way to keep everyone warm or something.


Nice chapter!
I look forwards to see what this city will be about.


Also, I want to mention this small animation inspired by the same game as this story:

Oooooo are we getting a last autumn vibe!? Sweet.

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