A bunch of High Schoolers suddenly find themselves getting exposed to Equestrian magic. Though practically anyone would be delighted, its a bit inconvenient when you keep turning into a pony in the middle of third period.
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Now I'm going to have to make this my 'bus book' and reread to remember everything that went on before. Don't trust my memory.
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Oof, that's on me for taking so long to update. Hopefully I'll get my next one out a lot quicker!
We're recovering! Story threads are weaving together! This is getting exciting!
But damn, the people we've lost...
It's strange how giddy I am just from characters meeting. It makes it feel like a lot is happening.
And there is! I love the descriptions characters are giving for unfamiliar characters and objects. They're absolutely perfect.
Poor Tina. She wants her wings back. I don't blame her.
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Recovering eventually!
Story threads are weaving, just hope they don't fray apart ;)
I *Love* thinking of creative ways to explain things, its fun to portray the world of a fantasy in a vivid way. Always awesome to hear your thoughts on these crazy horse scribblins.
Well this sure was an eventful chapter! You really have a knack for keeping so many individual parts of a wider plot moving alongside each other, each part/storyline able to be taken in isolation but shining a light on the greater scope of the story and events when taken all together – especially when it's not always presented in a chronologically linear way (thinking for example about the content of the news flash in Arty's part being a follow-up to the next part with Redmond, and potentially the mercenaries from Angie's part carrying their injured leader to the hospital glimpsed at the end of Arty's?).
And so many fun individual elements to read about, too! With Jake having to reconcile with their biological and cultural heritage, I'm curious in which direction they could push the renegade changelings. And Nova's role in the story is maybe becoming a little clearer now, if it's not just another deception..! There's still a lot of pieces moving, and I can't wait to see in which direction they may be headed!
(Oh, and hugs for poor Mike...)
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There really is a lot going on to manage. I'm glad you think my chaos has something interesting in it. That part with Angie's mercenaries is actually different people, but that'll become clear in future chapters. Jake has a lot going on with them, they'll have a lot of next chapter to have some resolvement. The renegade changelings have their part to play, and side to pick. Nova is definitely going to be a large player in all this. Thank you again for all your help in getting this chapter finished in the first place!
Finally got around to rereading the story so I could read the latest chapter. I feel like I need to make one of those charts that show you where every character is as they progress through the story.
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Oof...that's on me. Hopefully things will get easier to follow as the perspectives start to merge. I'll have to include some references and rehashes on each of their parts as it goes on.
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It begins!
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Royal Road?
Kind of the point of the fic is to show just how different Earth is from Equestria. They aren't meant to be the same, or even similar in many aspects.