A bunch of High Schoolers suddenly find themselves getting exposed to Equestrian magic. Though practically anyone would be delighted, its a bit inconvenient when you keep turning into a pony in the middle of third period.
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so we have 2 chryssys.
and Twilight, for fucks sake. KILL Chryssy. how many more wil,l die before you get it into your think head you have to kill a baddie at times
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Would like you to put that into spoilers if you can, don't want to spoil that for future readers. As for the comment itself, well, Twilight is her own mare, but she has changed a bit from her time with Tempest.
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don't see why spoilers I comment on the chapter that does happen.
But Twilight is the RULER of a nation. the time of redemption for chryssy is over. again how many more ponies will die for her to get that.
Enter the heat of battle!
ENGAGE!
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I feel that I did a little bit better with the dialogue this time. Glad you enjoyed some of it ;) Thanks, as always for your reading and comments!
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It's because the comment stream appears underneath the opening to the story itself. Not just on the chapter. (you go to the story main page and you'll see every comment)
K.O.
Cold iron, eh? Effective against fey creatures AND Changelings!
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Can't let that Trigonometry go to waste, could we?
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Seemed an appropriate weakness to the dangerously overpowered lings, not to mention its "kinda" canon friendly!
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Thank you, hope you're still enjoying it so far.
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I haven't left yet.
Nice to see Twilight in action! It feels so appropriate that she'd make use of the strengths and knowledge of her friends and allies as Princess of Friendship, but also of her mastery of her own Element (even dark magic, audacious!) – all of it articulated into a precise plan, of course!
And now another mystery finds its answer – Not just one Chrysalis, but two! I suspected there was something strange with how the Chrysalis we had already seen was acting, and with how changelings were speaking about new and different methods... Clearly this more ruthless Chrysalis isn't from our protagonists' Earth, and with the presence of portal(s)... Could she be Prime!Chrysalis's counterpart from the Equestria Girls universe, as Twilight hinted at? In any case it'll be interesting to see how these two Queens play off each other – they already seem to be quite different in how they view the Changelings they lead – children, or soldiers...
Will Jake finally join our core group? At least Mike is reasonably friendly (and for some obscure reason, I ship it!). Maybe having an immature Queen at their side could help when confronted to a brainwashed assassin..?
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Well, it kind of is her MO ;). Twilight has definitely shown the capacity to cast it before, magic is just a tool after all, its how its used that defines its nature. It's also one of the only canon methods of suppressing magical abilities. Two Chryssi's has been a concept that has held my attention for some time.
Only time will tell with Jake and Mike... Predator and Prey...or Friend and Foe?
As always thanks for the pre-read and our discord conversations are always fun. Can't wait on your next 5score chapter!
Just when one plot line resolves, several more appear to replace it! Very intrigued to see where the plot line goes with this second Chrysalis. My guess is that she might be from the EqG universe since it’s stated that she is neither from Earth nor Equestria.
Also, where were Tempest and her group being held at the start of the previous chapter? It seemed rather unguarded so was it a veterinary clinic? Although that wouldn’t explain how Tempest had her magic recoil on her...
Still greatly enjoying the story and looking forward to what’s going to happen next.
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Chryssi is a tricky one. And yes That was definitely a vet clinic. I have a habit of only indirectly stating things. If you're referring to the recoil its because she ran into a glass door.