A bunch of High Schoolers suddenly find themselves getting exposed to Equestrian magic. Though practically anyone would be delighted, its a bit inconvenient when you keep turning into a pony in the middle of third period.
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Oh hello human Starlight
Aww poor Arty, I just want to give them a hug! I hope that their medical magic can help their body heal, or maybe that'll just force them even more into the shape of Morning Star...
Between Arty's poniness being revealed to a compromised hospital staff (including Mike's own mom!), the explosion at the school, talk of 'other attacks' following Alt!Chrysalis's order, Nova revealing bits of her nature and goals, and Tempest's team closing in, this feels like a tipping point for the story so far. A very nice, eventful chapter, and excited to see what happens next!
Oh, and yay Ocellus!
Any day with an exile update is a good day
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Any day I get a supportive comment is a great one. ;)
I really like the pace of the story and my growing excitement for more :D
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I'm glad you've enjoyed it! I wanted to start a little slow, but now I feel like I might be going a little fast. Unfortunately if I didn't go a little fast this story might end up taking several years to finish.
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Starlight? I don't see any Starlights... ;)
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Arty could definitely use some hugs. The poor human/pone...
Magic has consequences, and its certainly not the silver bullet to every problem. The medical staff have quite a situation on their hands here. A lot of things are finally being put into motion, but all the things aren't all moving just yet. A few characters have had such small parts so far that need to have their roles revealed...
Ocellus is a cutie, but a little inspired by Prey she's a lot tougher than she looks...
I keep thinking this story will get lighter but every chapter is just more tense than the last
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It’s quite the situation for sure...Hope you’ve been enjoying it still so far ;). Thanks for commenting!
“That’s good, unfortunately it seems we got a new student that wasn’t on the roster.” He holds up a paper that immediately looks familiar...Especially after I recognize that it’s a mix of english and ponish… “Does anyone know who ‘Morning Star’ is? I really would hate to have missed a student. They’ve clearly done some good work here, though I have to say I’m not the most experienced in runes...”
I know that it’s hardly the main focal point of this chapter, but I was very happy to see you continue to build upon the linguistic code-switching in this chapter that was teased a few chapters ago. I’m curious to see if it ultimately continues into affect their speech as well!
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I like to seed the details of future events along the way, otherwise just popping things out of thin air feels like cheating. I can't promise it'll go the way you expect (because it'd be boring if it did) but I do hope to at least make the results entertaining.