A bunch of High Schoolers suddenly find themselves getting exposed to Equestrian magic. Though practically anyone would be delighted, its a bit inconvenient when you keep turning into a pony in the middle of third period.
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Lots of interaction between Jake and Mike in this chapter, yay (and the image of a backpack changeling is quite cute)! It certainly gives some levity compared to what's been happening around them.
And poor Arty... Considering what happened with his mom, how would his father react learning that she was actually right all along..? I hope bringing Mrs. Arnesto into the fold will help delay this looming catastrophe.
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Hoping to get a bit more in-depth with how Jake relates to the group in different ways. (And yes, little changelings are always cute~).
It's certainly going to have to happen eventually. The question now is how they're both going to handle it. It certainly is past due that Mrs. Arnesto was brought into everything though...
I love how changeling magic is described to work in this chapter: of course a picture wouldn't do justice. Of course clothes being part of you would feel weird. Love the little details. You always do a good job creating interesting visuals. Poor Arty lying unconscious half-transformed on the bathroom floor after getting stabbed while Jake lies in their hospital bed and gets their love from heir dad. There's some twisted sense of comedy to that and it makes it so memorable.
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I love details! Perhaps a little too much, but at least I'm not making a eulogy on a tree branch xD. Twisted irony is quite an fun thing to play with.