Awesome idea you should put a list of Peni and Scarab's powers in the next chapter along with a list of different types of webbing. Can't wait to see more!
Just because I'm an American grammar/spelling Nazi...
I walk passed the ail of clothing, not paying it much mind.
I walk past the aisle of clothing, not paying it much mind. (if you want 'passed', use "I passed the aisle of clothing, not paying it much mind."
other pony, whom I realize if Tree Hugger,
other pony, whom I realize is Tree Hugger, There were other "items", but they may have just been an expression of your style. Still, I'll be following the story.
Your specific powers are on the third sheet. Feel free to hold onto it for reference if you are too stupid to remember everything without constantly needing a refresher.
Well that's rude
“WHAT FUCKING ASSWIPE!” I yell, before tossing the shreds to the ground. “He yanks me from my life without warning, alters my very being without asking if I’m okay with it, changes me into the opposite gender, strands me in Equestria and then expects me to be grateful to him for uprooting my whole life and that I’ll blindly follow him into some stupid ass war?!
9783554 Do you know what the Spider Sense can do? If you think the Spider Sense isn't OP, I think very little can impress you. After all, the Spider Sense is very keen on warning not just about physical dangers, but can even warn about people bluffing, lying, potential hostile intent of people that aren't even aware of you.
In Avengers/Marvel canon, Spider Man is banned from Poker tournament, because his Spider Sense gives him an unfair advantage. The Spider Sense is also responsible for Peter being able to web-swing like he does, as it informs him if the point he is attaching his ebs to is safe for web swinging or not. There's a very good video by Factfiends here that talks about it.
9783773 I think Bonberjean meant not OP as in a knife or something can actually hurt the character, where as every other Displaced needs a planet or something dropped on them to do any damage. I admit the Spider Sense is OP in some cases, but there's probably a way around it like magic. It didn't work on many versions of Venom, so there could be a magic equivalent that it doesn't work on. But you do raise a good point and I could also be wrong. OP is just a label and everyone has their own definition. Like, to some people Iron Man is more OP than the Hulk while other people think the opposite it true.
You are both different from the original Peni Parker and her spider, since you are in a world far more devoid of advanced technology than the year 3145.
Still, from what I read about Peni Parker, she is quite a skilled engineer, isn't she? So she might be able to figure some tech out later?
And I don't think you need them to crossover. Since they are not usual Displaced, it is safe to assume they have no mean to commute between dimension. Unless you want Cyborg's help in getting Peni the SP//dr suit.
“I was going to be moving out in a few weeks. I was finally going to start living outside the family home and now? Now I’m in a fantasy world, half my age and the complete opposite gender.”
Hey, male spiders don't have penises either, an in fact often die during spidersex. Being a Peni-sless Parker isn't the biggest deal in the world right now.
... Because if giant-tiddied anthro ponies are doing naked yoga in the forest, this is probably the kind of world where Twilight would have a spell to temporarily fix that.
One look at Peni and Scarab and Pinkie will probably dance around and start singing "SPIDER MONKEY, SPIDER MONKEY, SMALL AND CUTE, AND HAS A SPIDER FLUNKY!!!"
Repeat DONT LEWD HER!
I like this. I like this quite a bit!
Sees peni parker and the mature tag. Puts the story in read it later
Reads the description to find no sex between underage characters... Puts it off the read it later list
OTAKU LOGIC!!!
No lewd that's ok
I have the f. party
Awesome idea you should put a list of Peni and Scarab's powers in the next chapter along with a list of different types of webbing.
Can't wait to see more!
Just because I'm an American grammar/spelling Nazi...
I walk past the aisle of clothing, not paying it much mind. (if you want 'passed', use "I passed the aisle of clothing, not paying it much mind."
other pony, whom I realize is Tree Hugger,
There were other "items", but they may have just been an expression of your style.
Still, I'll be following the story.
I like dis, plz more!
But...I'm Peni Parker
Great story, looking forward to more!
Well that's rude
......yes
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I like Peni Parker, she's smart and ADORABLE!!!
mmmmm yes this pleases me, more
9782926
Seems legit. Where’s the spider robot though?
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Still undergoing repairs after that adventure with Miles.
There's a ton of typos and misspellings, but still not bad. I look forward to more.
Off to a pretty good start. Hopefully there will be some more anime cliches. Keep up the good work.
Congratz, you got featured. 8/15/2019
ohh... a displaced about an obscure character and not OP? tracking
Hunh... color me intrigued. Can't wait to see more
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Do you know what the Spider Sense can do? If you think the Spider Sense isn't OP, I think very little can impress you. After all, the Spider Sense is very keen on warning not just about physical dangers, but can even warn about people bluffing, lying, potential hostile intent of people that aren't even aware of you.
In Avengers/Marvel canon, Spider Man is banned from Poker tournament, because his Spider Sense gives him an unfair advantage. The Spider Sense is also responsible for Peter being able to web-swing like he does, as it informs him if the point he is attaching his ebs to is safe for web swinging or not. There's a very good video by Factfiends here that talks about it.
9783773
I think Bonberjean meant not OP as in a knife or something can actually hurt the character, where as every other Displaced needs a planet or something dropped on them to do any damage. I admit the Spider Sense is OP in some cases, but there's probably a way around it like magic. It didn't work on many versions of Venom, so there could be a magic equivalent that it doesn't work on. But you do raise a good point and I could also be wrong. OP is just a label and everyone has their own definition. Like, to some people Iron Man is more OP than the Hulk while other people think the opposite it true.
9783554
You must be in the old or bad side of the Displaced.
Still, from what I read about Peni Parker, she is quite a skilled engineer, isn't she? So she might be able to figure some tech out later?
And I don't think you need them to crossover. Since they are not usual Displaced, it is safe to assume they have no mean to commute between dimension. Unless you want Cyborg's help in getting Peni the SP//dr suit.
Hey, male spiders don't have penises either, an in fact often die during spidersex. Being a Peni-sless Parker isn't the biggest deal in the world right now.
... Because if giant-tiddied anthro ponies are doing naked yoga in the forest, this is probably the kind of world where Twilight would have a spell to temporarily fix that.
One look at Peni and Scarab and Pinkie will probably dance around and start singing "SPIDER MONKEY, SPIDER MONKEY, SMALL AND CUTE, AND HAS A SPIDER FLUNKY!!!"
Interesting story i look forward to it
Is...this story a remnant of the War of Shadows?