• Published 5th Jul 2019
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An Innocent Glow:A School Raze Rewrite - CozyGlow57



What if Cozy Glow was innocent?What if someone else was making all of the magic disappear?

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An Innocent Glow:The Prologue

At the School of Friendship Derpy is delivering mail but she bumps into the sign and drops the mail . Cozy Glow picks the mail up .

" Thank you for the mail delivery . Have a wonderful day ! "

In the School of Friendship she picks up an empty juice box and throws the box in the recycle and the straw in the trash . Then she notices a filly having trouble with a map .

" You're new here, right? " Cozy asks .The fily nods.

" I'm Cozy Glow , Proffesor Sparkle's friendship assistant . " Cozy Glow said " Welcome to our school ! Your first class is just down that hall . "

The filly walked away happily as Cozy headed towards the libary . She flew in and noticed Silverstream stumped on a crossword puzzle .

" A seven letter word for "teamwork". Have you tried "synergy" ? " Cozy asked her .

" That's it ! Thanks, Cozy ! " Silverstream said .

" What are friends for ? " Cozy replied .

Then Cozy Glow flew into Twilight's Office .

" Good morning,Proffesor Sparkle " Cozy said as she handed Twilight the mail .

" The mail's here already ! What time is it ? I'm late for my class's trip to Cloudsdale " Twilight panicked .

" Don't worry " Cozy reassured her "I asked Proffesor Rainbow Dash to cover for you "

" And she said yes ? " Twilight asked her .

" Uh-huh . I told her how busy you are and how much her loyalty meant to you . I also color coded your teaching Schedule by friendship element and catalouged all the magical artifacts in the school . " Cozy said " I hope that's okay . "

"Okay ? Cozy, that is amazing ! You're like my right hoof mare ! I don't know what I'd do without you . "

" It's like you taught me . Helping others is what friendship is all about . "

" Exactly. And hopefully my class is learning that on their field trip right now "

" I heard they might do some sightseeing first " Cozy Glow said .

" Proffesor Sparkle ? " Cozy asked Twilight .

" Yes , Cozy ? " Twilight replied .

" While I was cataloging the artifacts I thought I saw Chancellor Neighsay for a moment " Cozy admitted .

" I'm sure you were just imagining things , Cozy " Twilight reassured her " If Chancellor Neighsay was in my school , I would know about it . "

Meanwhile , In Cloudsdale

" Ta-da ! The Pegasus Weather Factory ! " Rainbow Dash said " Every drop of rain or flake of snow comes from there . "

The students awed.

" I know , right ? " Rainbow said " Hey ! The cool stuff's over here ! "

"Wow ! I've never stood on a cloud before . " Ocellus exclaimed .

" You can't normally. But for our trip I cast a spell that lets us walk like pegasi " Starlight explianed .

" Hey Yona ! Come check out this view ! " Gallus said " Unless you're too scared . "

" Yona not scared " Yona said . All of a sudden Yona fell through the cloud .

" Now Yona scared ! "

The others looked shocked as the other non pegasi fell through the clouds .

" Come on " Rainbow Dash said " We gotta catch 'em "
The non pegasi screamed but they all got caught . Yona started screaming but she got caught by Ocellus and Gallus .

"Gotcha ! " Gallus said .

" It's okay,Yona. " Ocellus said " You like flying ,remember ? "

" Flying, not falling " Yolla replies as Ocellus and Gallus put her on the ground with a "thud". Yona starts kissing the floor .

" I don't understand " Starlight said " It's like my spell stopped working . That's … never happened before . "

Author's Note:

I hope you all enjoyed this chapter ! This is my first story so constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.

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