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An Innocent Glow:A School Raze Rewrite - CozyGlow57



What if Cozy Glow was innocent?What if someone else was making all of the magic disappear?

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Chapter 4:Chancellor Neighsay Arrives

Cozy Glow walked into Twilight's Office while the Young 6 watched and found Chancellor Neighsay sitting in Twilight's chair,much to the suprise of her and the Young 6.

"So this is who Starlight left in charge in her place before she joined Twilight and her friends ?"Chancellor Neighsay said.

"Yes but how do you know about that?" Cozy Glow said.

"I had some inside help." Chancellor Neighsay said.

"Um....is there anything I can do for you?" Cozy asked.

"That won't be necessary. Twilight's folly stops here."Chancellor Neighsay said "As of now, I am headstallion. And I have quite a few changes to make."

Meanwhile,In Tartarus

"If all these monsters lost their magic, then getting past Cerberus should be easy-peasy!" Pinkie Pie said.She turned a monster's frown into a smile but it turned into a frown again.

"Look out!"Rainbow Dash exclaimed. Then Cerberus ran past them and they all got out of the way.

"I'll talk to him."Fluttershy said.Cerberus growled.

"Um, excuse me, puppy?"Fluttershy asked.Cerberus snorted.You're a very good guard dog. Yes, you are. But, um, we were wondering if we could get by to check on Tirek."

Cerberus slurped.

"That looks like a yes." Applejack said.

"I'll get you a towel, darling." Rarity said.Fluttershy giggled.The Main 6 and Spike approached Tirek.

"The Princess of Friendship here for a visit." Tirek said "What have I done to earn the honor of your company?"

"We want answers, Tirek." Twilight said "Magic is disappearing from Equestria."

"I know." Tirek said "What a waste of such...delicious power."

"So you are behind this! " Rainbow Dash exclaimed.

"Silly filly, if I had all of that magic, you think I'd still be locked up in here?" Lord Tirek asked her "But I might know something about it..."

Meanwhile,At the School of Friendship,In Twilight's Office Chancellor Neighsay threw the student records of the Young 6 in the trash.

"What are you doing?!" Cozy Glow exclaimed "Those are Twilight's student files!"

"These aren't. Not anymore." Chancellor Neighsay said "With Equestria under attack, ponies must stand together. Twilight has endangered us all by skipping off on friendship trips while these disgusting creatures run loose."

"Take that back!" Cozy Glow exclaimed "They aren't disgusting!"

"Yes they are.I'll make sure to rid this school of these monsters and there is nothing you can do about it unless you want to be kicked out of the school."

The Young 6 started talking from the doorway giving away their positions.

"Did you hear something?" Chancellor Neighsay asked Cozy Glow.

" Nope!" Cozy Glow replied,realizing who was behind the door.Chancellor Neighsay opened the door to reveal the Young 6.The Young 6 grunted as Cozy Glow panicked,worried about what Chancellor Neighsay would do to the Young 6.

"You again.As I suspected" Chancellor Neighsay said.

"Chancellor Neighsay please don't do anything to them.They didn't do anything wrong." Cozy Glow said,shutting up once Chancellor Neighsay shot her a threatining glare after chaining the Young 6.

Later Chancellor Neighsay opened the door of and threw the Young 6 into a dorm room.

" You disgusting creatures will stay here while I summon your guardians to take you home." Chancellor Neighsay said.

"Wait! You were right about them from the beginning, Chancellor." Sandbar said "I see that now."

"What are you saying?!" Smolder exclaimed.

"Sandbar?!" Silverstream said.

"I don't want anything to do with these disgusting creatures! " Sandbar said.Gallus and Samolder glared at him while Yona,Ocellus and SÄ°lverstream stared at him in shock.

"Wisely put, colt." Chancellor Neighsay said.Then he disabled the chains and the ponies left the room.

"Everypony will come to their senses eventually." Chancellor Neighsay said before Sandbar closed the door.

At Sweet Apple Acres,Sandbar was throwing apples at Apple Bloom's window.She opened the window to see a watering can getting thrown at her.

"What in tarnation?!" Apple Bloom exclaimed.

"Sorry. I ran out of apples. I need the Cutie Mark Crusaders." Sandbar said "My friends are in trouble. Chancellor Neighsay locked them up."

"Huh? I thought Cozy Glow was in charge." Apple Bloom said

"Not anymore. But you guys are good buddies." Sandbar said "If you can convince her to distract Neighsay, I can break out my friends. Will you help me?"

"Do mulberries have seeds?" Apple Bloom said,then left. Apple Bloom returned two seconds later.

"That's a yes" Apple Bloom clarified.

Author's Note:

I hope you guys enjoyed this chapter.The next chapter will be the end of School Raze Part 1.

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