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Great chapter, great update. You know, your story is the one I most look forward to seeing new chapters for.
On another note. OMG, Ive worked with people like Shiny and Luna. They are fine until the see you coming at them holding more work for them. Then its the heavy breathing the dirty looks and the "I don't need this crap." thoughts.
Made me grin when they both acted that way.
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“On her doorstep was Twilight Sparkle. While Derpy deeply respected the mare, like most in Ponyville, they wished she'd either switch to decaf, or start hitting the harder stuff.” -Dan_s Comments
"Really? Really? I'm imagining Rod Serling as a tiny horse now, thanks for that."
In any case, yeah, this world has a good track record of redeeming the irredeemable. If Dawn Wings could talk to Stygian... well, she'd be in a very different world by that point. And she'd probably hate it even more. At least at this point in the timeline, there's something for her to do.
In any case, I doubt infiltrating the hive will go quite as smoothly. Here's looking forward to seeing where the rough patches lie. And how hard Twilight's going to Twilight over trying to recreate the translation spell.
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Well, to be fair, Dawn Wings is kinda going out of her way to be a little aggravating. Mostly because she's irritated by her situation, and knows that stuffy people are the most fun to mess with, because they give the best reactions.
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One of the reasons I set things in this time period, because it gave her something to work against (the changelings).
As an aside, if she'd arrived in S1, and was around for Over a Barrel, she'd probably have sided with the buffalo and torched Appleoosa. As far as she would have been concerned, the ponies were pulling the same thing the Europeans did in the Americas, and since Dawn's human form is Native American (Kawaiisu tribe specifically), you can probably imagine that's… a bit of a berserk button for her.
It's going to pose a challenge, no doubt. Then again, Dawn does have a built in radar system (her threat detection gift) and the changelings were kind enough to have an architectural style that includes lots of little hidey-holes for someone her size to duck into.