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Wow the princesses don't really know what to make of her do they. Not going to say she's in the right, but at the same time her thinking is based on human and super-natural human vs Ponies. I just wish the princesses would give her thoughts a little more consideration. The language barrier doesn't help.
Oh, she's much more than just a pony.
Chrysalis's silk, why am I getting mauled by an angry hippogriff!? How am I— Ow.
I have good news!
Interesting to see that the FIENDship changeling backstory is canon for this world. Thanks a lot, Star Swirl.
And so Dawn goes above and beyond the call of duty. And expectation. And desire. Here's hoping she didn't upset too much in the process. Either way, her cover's more than a little blown. Mysterious crow-hippogriffs flying into the capitol at ludicrous speed are the sorts of things rumor mills can only dream of. And who knows who's listening?
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As has been established, Dawn works under a very different set of priorities. Getting them to align is not easy.
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That she is. That she is indeeed.
Without spoiling too much, the changelings in this integrate a bit of both the cartoon and FIENDship stuff. Mostly that I'm treating changelings like a form of fae creature, like they are in FIENDship.
And, yea, Dawn's not happy about the whole situation, but she's trying to salvage what she sees as the princesses making some very boneheaded moves (from her perspective). Thankfully, this is the first time that anypony other than the princesses have actually seen her crinos form, and her cutiemark doesn't show up when she's not fully pony, so thanfully, that' little bit of easy ID is off the table. Plus, she made sure to address Luna in Kawaiisu, not English. Kawaiisu, being a Uto-Aztecan language, sounds very different to English. Its still alien and weird to the ponies, but it doesn't sound like Dawn Wings' normal words.
please remember not all of us know the source materialI love your book. its first few chapters where shaky, but its good and solid writing. this last chapter left me feeling like I'm missing something. perhaps it's a plot thing, perhaps not.
Just please remember the true Author leads the reader though his world.
The Monk
Her hands were still bound with rope, she debated an escape before all the stupidity gave her an aneurysm. -Scarheart
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Thank you for the feedback. If you can figure out what felt off, please let me know.