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As opposed to completely rational activites like fighting insane alicorns, chaos incarnate, and shapeshifting psychic parasites.
'Fucking suction cup hooves, how do they work!?'
"In my day, if somepony was abductin' you off the street, they at least had th' decency t' use their own face."
In any case, I can understand Dash's suspicion, though it is important to note that the changeling failed in its attempt. Of course, that's coming from someone with information she doesn't have right now. In any case, Twilight has friends looking out for her and Dawn's on the prowl. I see this going relatively well in the near future.
Possible emphasis on "relatively."
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I mean, if that's your normal…
The same way that they can kick an apple tree and cause the apples to precisely fall off into baskets without splintering the trunk. Magic.
Well, Dawn's pretty damn good at her job, so… here's hoping that things don't go completely awry.
This story is so fun. It explains the world that dawn wings is from without going into tiring paragraphs. It has a character that has flaws and it's always fun to read about trying to find there place in a world they are stuck in but, it's done in a more realistic way. Also breaking twilight innocence like that was a little bit gory. You couldn't have aimed for another vital spot that wont spew blood everywhere . But there biology would probably be a little different and wouldn't guarentee an instant kill lol
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Thank you. I try.
Re: where Dawn aimed her shot - as far as she was concerned, she needed to kill the changeling, and she needed to kill it in one hit. No guarantee that a body shot was going to do it, so it had to be the head. Thing is, she would have preferred not to have killed it, because she figured there would be repercussions for doing it, both with the ponies, and the changelings. But, when she weighed the cost of making the kill vs. the cost of letting Twilight get killed, she couldn't let the latter happen.
Of course, she was operating under the rules and assumptions of her world, not Equestria. Such as changelings just kidnapping, not killing, their targets. Had she known that, she might have let Twilight be taken, but swooped in and saved her once she knew where the changelings were holding up.
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Thanks for pointing that line out, I remember most of it but the fact that you can call out text like that to answer questions is good writing because it pays attention to detail and explains the character actions more