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As a major perk that seems pretty weak, and most of Masters suggestions seemed more like punishments. Twilight always seems so passive, so careless in this whole story. I want our analytical, focused, and above all friendly pony back. She hasn’t bothered to learn anything about her new world or her new friends (“friends”) in the whole time she’s been here, just had pointless sex with them over and over. Was saving a few minutes on her weekly commute really the best she could come up with?!
Wait...those are major perks? Are the first three permanent? Because otherwise they sound like minor perks. Also, I'm not sure about them being called 'perks' anymore. Perks are explicitly helpful bonuses, but a large number of the 'perks' Twilight's been offered have just been alterations to the current circumstances; a step sideways rather than forward.
Except for the last one those "major" perks didn't seem to be that major. (Number one and three might even be considered as major punishments.)
But I must say it was very responsible from her to not choose the last one.
The one she did choose sounds more like an minor perk, just as she realised herself in the end.
Anyway, I look forward to see what other (mis)adventures she will have inside the show.
(And which rewards she had choosen, once she gets out.)
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This was actually not originally intended to be a series. I admit some things may not be optimal. I just felt like writing a bunch of kinky scenes and figured I might as well give them a storyish.
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It certainly seem to work just fine.
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From previous chapters:
Aren't duality actually includes hooves off?