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How does she even know... Never mind.
I wonder what the punishment is this time.
"Major commercial street" implies it is something very public...
Can you make the next chapter longer please if possible
Typos:
> “Anyway, that have to be enough for today, I’m about to close up.”
Should be "that will".
> with a small shudder, her hot lit to keep it in place
Her horn lit.
Now:
> “A significant amount of points may require a permanent change to your living conditions, lifestyle or physical form,” it answered calmly.
Permanent change? Not just "for the duration of the show"? Something she would wind up having after the show?
... Why do I get the feeling that the whole point of this "show" is to end up giving "contestants" those permanent changes for the enjoyment of the viewers?