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You've put so much work into this story, and it shows. It's pretty hot. But I want to know -- is there going to be an antagonist? Rising stakes? A climax? This is good porn, no lie. But I hope you have something planned for the rest of the story other than just lots of sex. All the hard work deserves no less.
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honestly, I'm was halfway to theorising that the rules of the show would make for a pretty good force of nature antagonist.
because basically, she has such a hard time preventing herself from accruing small amounts of punishment points, the show may be trying to keep itself fresh, by wearing her down with small punishments until she gets tired enough to let them pool, then stack them up for the game changers.
the reason that's an antagonist, is that it gives Twilight something to fight for, to prevent herself from being too twisted by the show for when she returns to her real life.
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Thank you. I don't like giving spoilers, but it's going to be mostly porn.
You could say Spike had been an Bad Dragon and need some more toys...
Maybe somthing more creative to not only restrain but tame him?