Isn't it every bronies dream to visit Equestria as a pony? But what would you do if it really happens?
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I like this... The fact that there is a German version is cool, because I am tryng to learn the language so I like to pop up the English version if I ever have trouble with a word.
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Good luck ^^ German is not so hard to learn.
I am intrigued, while self insert stories are quite frequent on this sight (assuming this is a self insert). All the same, you have piqued my interests, favorited for the purpose of tracking, and good luck, the translation is quite well done.
I don't like it
I LOVE it
i don't really like the story but the way he told it was really good but i don't perticully like it my self but its written good *claps*
Or maybe she really doesn't live there anymore because you stuck her in the cellar!
See... I'm confused. Normally I LOATHE 'brony in Equestria' stories, but I'll give this one a tiny, tiny chance.
It is always weird to me when people refer to asthma as an illness. I know i technically is, but it doesn't really hold me back at all. Don't get me wrong, I spent much time in the hospital because of it when I was younger(steroid shots when I was a toddler for croup, respritorry therapist, got my nebulizer one Easter I ended up in the ER), but now I've gotten to where it's only really noticeable when I'm sick. I had to train a lot harder to build up my cardio and stamina than some, but I made it through my first and second degree black belt fitness tests with no problems. I also go running and do jump rope fairly often. Guess it is just strange for me to see asthma hold someone back athletically, when for me, it was one of my drives to get in shape.
Okay, mini rant over, back to the story.
Ugh. Bronies.
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People do die from asthma today, even treated.
Not every one responds well to treatment.
I want to like it, but the whole "Earth sucks and humans are all assholes" thing just ruins it. At least for me it does.
Jesus, the self pity goes on for days here. The only thing that is keeping me reading on is just how human you are able to portray your character. I like how limited and flawed their world view is. It has a very real sense to it, even if it comes off whiny as fuck. I hope in future chapters the character will realize this and, for want of a better term (I am tired and can't think if one atm) grow up.
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bad eyesight is a disability too. People don't think it because glasses and contacts are so common, but alot of people wouldn't be able to function without visual aids.
For some reason I thought the main character was female.