Isn't it every bronies dream to visit Equestria as a pony? But what would you do if it really happens?
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aawww...that was a cute date
Seeing as how this is being translated, might I suggest an English editor? There are quite a few grammar errors here and there.
Wow not the reaction I would have thought.
"last time I touched one of AJ's father's things I got jumped by Applebloom."
But D'awww worthy nonetheless.
Ha! Pinkie pulled TV magic on Tio.
Aw, how sweet. Somehowñ I get the feeling Twi coming back with the princess(es?) won't lead to sunshine and roses.
You can just delete "at". If he were stopping by some event or specific place at Sugar Cube corner, then you'd need the "at". Here, it is not needed.
This one you could leave as part of her accent, but it should be "were". That's up to you, but I thought I'd point it out, in case it was just an error.