Isn't it every bronies dream to visit Equestria as a pony? But what would you do if it really happens?
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4245475 I knew I needed to change it, but I didn't know what the equivalent for pedophiles ponies would use, so I ended up leaving it.
4246801 The term FoalFiddler seems applicable. Also, I am enjoying this story too! Huzzah for a good author and translator. So long as none of the cast gets maimed, mauled, or digested, I am chill with this direction. Also, I hope that it is still on the inhabitants of ponyville and/or the princesses to save the day, not Tio. If he has a crucial hoof in doing so cool, but I just feel it should be on the cast to do it.
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So what about the editor/proofreader, hmmmm?
4250136 Pffft, overrated... I'm kidding man, you do a good job. I'm sure proofing a translated story takes quite a bit of effort.
4250397 As the translator... I feel sorry for JBL to have to go through the mess I create
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Honestly, it comes out in a rather excellent format by the time you both get through it. I've noticed some errors here and there, such as a missing word or slight tense slip, but you two should be proud of the work you've accomplished for this writer. As for the writer, this is the only story of his I've read so far, but it's definitely better than a large portion of the site. To think I've had this in my read later for almost a year (The Final Fantasy resemblance is why I put it in my read later in the first place). It's good enough that I'm hoping for more now.
And JBL, with how much I see you around the site, and how many stories you have your fingers in, excellent job. There ya go, have a bit more recognition!
4305548 Huzzah!
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Well ,thank you. I aim to impress. But when I read the German version these days I see my own mistakes I made back then. This was/is, after all, my first story. It only will be continued thanks to JBL and Gron, who decided that it's worth the effort (of translating and proofreading).
I honestly think that you should try Journey too. I personally thinks it's better in any way possible so far. While Nightmare as some problems in the earlier chapters with the plot (because I only started making notes and such after the first 30 chapters or so) and can be a bit confusing. To name one example. I mean, there are 2 years experience in writing between these two stories.