Isn't it every bronies dream to visit Equestria as a pony? But what would you do if it really happens?
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Oh fuck the feels.
I think it should be "more sturdy", but it might be "sturdier".
"I" Aura is no it. ;)
This part just makes it more confusing. I would delete those three words. It conveys the message without them more clearly than with them.
Just a bit confusing. I'm not sure a single word change would help though. My suggestion:
"She probably hadn't heard the last part of the sentence as the first part had been way too much for her."
Also... Oh no! He's gonna die. Man, poor Aura is gonna be crushed... well, not as much as him, but hey. Lol, had to put my obligitory panic in there.
Why would dropping the ponies off the airship be something to do? It's a lose-lose option. Either A) it's a changeling and it can fly, so it gets away scott-free. Or B) its a pony, it dies, and you're diplomatically boned.