• Published 6th Aug 2012
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Slendermane: Horror of the Everfree - Strumfreak



Will Twilight and Scootaloo be able to escape a supernatural being hunting them?

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Slendermane

As thin as a page, and as tall as a tree,
It lives in the dark of the Everfree.
It has no expression, but irradiates fear,
If you’re in its home, it will always be near.

It can stretch its form like it has rubber bones;
its origin will always remain unknown.
Its takes pegasus, unicorns, and Earth ponies alike,
its featureless being, their very last sight.

You can run and try to hide,
But without any light,
It will hunt you and catch you,
In the darkest of night.

It makes you run, makes you fear,
Makes you yell, makes you cry,
But in the end its only goal,
Is to make sure you die.

Its escaped victims,
Never hard to find,
For once touched they are bound,
By both magic and mind.

No eyes, no face, no tail, no mane,
the look of the creature can send you insane.
Trying to run will just bring you more pain,
because nopony escapes the Slendermane.

Comments ( 28 )

1111679 I never said either of those things happened dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png The way i see it, I left room open for a possible sequal... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png

1111679 And Scootaloo was only very sick from having odd chemicals get into her bloodstream dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png

Hope everyone enjoyed the story, I kinda wish it had gotten a little more popularity, but as long as those who did read it enjoyed it, I'm happy dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_grin.png Next story i write is going to be a massive challenge for me... it's a field of writing i never considered before... Romance dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_OMG_LOVE.png :heart:

SaP

...CAN I GETTA SEQUEL?!?

???

1112126 romance eh?...include slendermane and i'll be happy! but even if you don't i'll read it

1112271 Haha the poem definately needed more verses and yes, there was some run run cant escape in there :twilightsheepish:
And Slendermane... In a romance.... Sweet Celestia dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png That should be my sequel, the Slendermane only wanted to catch Twilight to date her dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png :twilightsmile: But in all seriousness I'm actually doing romance so I can associate my writing with as many genres and writing styles as possible, instead of just horror and gore. I'll be making it a real challenge for myself too. It's going to be a FlutterSpike romance :moustache::heart::yay:

SaP

1112280You might be on to something...

???

1112745 hehehehe...yeah...so! including slendermane? to test the limits of one feelings? for another?

Be sure to pm me when the sequel comes out...


Or I will hunt you down and choke you to death with penises :moustache:

1115744 :twilightoops::derpyderp2::trollestia: I definately wont forget :rainbowlaugh: May be a while though, i got 2 stories I want to finish first :twilightsmile: one romance, one... i'm not sure what it falls into yet :derpytongue2: i think it will be slice of life :yay: then Slendermane 2

Early warning: Beginning work on Slendermane: Requiem! Be expecting the first chapter within the fortnight! (I know that's a long time but please bear with me, I have to take into account writing the story, making the title card, and planning ahead other features to avoid plotholes and other mess ups. All grammar and spacing will be adjusted exactly to that of this story to avoid any complaints dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png

Clever and ominous poem, Its as if it was a real nursery rhyme to warn kids of the slendermane. The story was great. The ending was amazing and so bittersweet. A sequel you say? Slendermane: Requiem?Excellent.

1176968 Haha thankyou very much, but honestly I'm no poet, the poem was the hardest part to write for me. Glad to know you enjoyed and yes, I have put aside current projects to give my readers Slendermane: Requiem. Besides I really want to write it.

Excited to announce Requiem chapter 1 is on its way. Expect the first of chapters this saturday, hopefully by midday depending on the schedule and passing submission, I will likely submit it tomorrow.

IT'S DONE! Slendermane: Requiem, Chapter 1 has now been submitted, and hopefully will be available to all of you wonderful readers by midday. P.S. If you haven't activated the mature tab, it will be necessary for you to read Slendermane 2.

I have got to stop reading super depresing things. But besides that have a internet cookie and a :moustache::moustache::moustache:

1197383 It's really hard to stop doing if the story looks and is intriguing. And thankyou, depressing or not i hope you enjoyed it

i.imgur.com/E3EQ9.jpg?1 I got a referral on Rooster Teeth?? :rainbowhuh:

Read lator, Play Total War now.

1268826 haha enjoy it buddy

1533786

Not exactly the effect I was aiming for, but it works all the same :derpyderp1:

A poem? :ajbemused:
Though I actually thought it was good. I thought one of the rules is that you don't post poems? :rainbowhuh:
Still, it wasn't bad :rainbowlaugh:

3139710

Yeah, I thought a poem would be nice and eerie :3
Thankyou :twilightsheepish: glad you like it.
I think it is, but I guess I just wanted to post the poem on it's own, it just adds that little bit of creep factor after finishing the story.

3143872 Ok, like I said it's not bad and I like it :rainbowlaugh:

3372509 Well I am already doing the sequal, but if you clarify that it's unrelated to my work then that should be fine.

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