Seth Conway joins the military after a call for volunteers to train with their pony allies. Seeking direction, this could just give him what he seeks. Meeting a gorgeous, reticent mare named Schneeblume is the best part of his new adventure.
Godammit, I couldn't get off to this because you kept throwing in pop-culture references that I understood and laughed at. Good chapter though. I like that you tend to mix lore/character building into every chapter, even the ones with clop.
This chapter proved a good ride of emotions. The love and passion they have for each other really shown through. Thanks for the update. I look forward to reading the next one.
Yes, finally! I'd been looking forward to this scene and it was every bit as wholesome (and hot) as I'd hoped it would be.
He responded by gently taking her hoof back into his hand and bringing it up to his face so he could kiss it properly. That’s when he decided to open his eyes, expecting to see her blushing like crazy and smiling like she always did when he bestowed the little gestures on her.
And he did see just that... but what he didn’t expect—which made him recoil oh so slightly—was seeing Schneeblume’s beaming face marred with misty eyes and rivulets of tears beginning to dampen down her face.
Seth’s boyfriend-ly instincts instantly kicked in, and he scooched closer and placed his left hand comfortingly on her cheek once more.
“Hey hey hey... what’s wrong, babe? Did I do something bad? Say something weird?” he asked, perhaps a little too overzealously in his mind.
But his immediate fears were assuaged somewhat when Schnee only smiled through her tears and shook her head. She held his hand to her face with her hoof whilst giggling.
“No, dear, nothing at all! It's just...” Schnee pursed her lips, seemingly jogging her mind for the right words.
“...I’m just so—so happy with you, Seth.”
So, so very wholesome.
Knowing he had the full clear to grope and massage as he pleased, Seth helped himself to two (2) full servings of Schneeblume’s ass
Also, it's the little things like this that give me a real kick.
Even though his dick was screaming for a release… howling like a Lovecraftian horror in the night demanding to be set free from a magical seal of his pants, he was enjoying himself immensely.
Love it whenever I get to see a reference to lovecraft.
new chapter yes sees time shiiiiiit i have to go the bed FUCK IT first thing after school damm Mondays
I give that chapter a nein out of ten.
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Goddamn son!
This was amazing. From that sparring match, the beautifully written love scene and those feels at the end. I absolutely love Schnee.
This was qorth waiting for my dude. I absolutely loved it.
This was a great way to bring them together finally, I love these characters
"Seth helped himself to two (2) full servings of Schneeblume’s ass"
This for some reason made me actually laugh out loud.
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You know EXACTLY why it made you laugh. Because I wrote it with the exact thought in mind
FINALLY!!!!! Fantastic read!!!! Absolutely glorious!!!!! Now PLEASE can Seth go buy a ring for this mare??
EDIT: seriously though, they belong together forever
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Get the hoppity out of your toppity
Godammit, I couldn't get off to this because you kept throwing in pop-culture references that I understood and laughed at.
Good chapter though. I like that you tend to mix lore/character building into every chapter, even the ones with clop.
This chapter proved a good ride of emotions. The love and passion they have for each other really shown through. Thanks for the update. I look forward to reading the next one.
Haha Sabaton reference
Yes, finally! I'd been looking forward to this scene and it was every bit as wholesome (and hot) as I'd hoped it would be.
So, so very wholesome.
Also, it's the little things like this that give me a real kick.
... months?
I so hope we get to see his first day of training, after all this...
I wouldn't be the asshole I'm so lovingly called if I failed to point it out, for the n-th time:
nose!
you crazy son of a bitch, you got a sabaton reference in erotic fiction!