Seth Conway joins the military after a call for volunteers to train with their pony allies. Seeking direction, this could just give him what he seeks. Meeting a gorgeous, reticent mare named Schneeblume is the best part of his new adventure.
The Crusaders have an interesting take in this fic, but I kinda like them without the overly childlike ignorance. Schnee is adorable! After getting used to Stella, it's a big change
9363968 They're teenagers by this point (and there's more color on this in Schnee's main trilogy) so they'll have more maturity around them.
Yeah I needed a break from Stella--she was starting to not be funny to write anymore which meant I was writing too much of her, so here I am. She'll be back funnier than ever though!
9363972 I meant that I think that you aged up the Crusaders personalities well. Changing the age of any established character can definitely go wrong if done incorrectly.
I’m scared. He still has to go to basic training in a few months.... how is all this gonna work? I better get my permission slip signed Incase there turns out to be a feels trip.
I know nothing of the previous stories... but would a four year combat Vet who’s been out for five years be interested in a kid who has never even been to Basic yet? There is a YAWNING GULF of life experience between them. They are (or should be) at different points in their lives. Seth is still figuring out who he is, and she’s probably trying to put herself back together.
9364654 Would probably depend on the individuals in play. Some would just want to finish composing themselves and others want to have some semblance of normalcy I'd figure
You are right though. The valley between the two of them is quite large. Would be interesting to see how this works
Lovely! I quite like Seth’s character, maybe it’s because I find his inner voice relatable... too relatable. I know it’s a clopfic an’ all, but somehow the pacing feels fine! I’m just a bit uncertain of their chemistry as a couple for now... eh probably just ptsd from my psych test on human relationships.
I do think you’ll find it’s concepts useful! Nothing wrong with the story (or more scientific research)! Look up: Social penetration theory, self-disclosure, Knapp's relational development model- heck I’ll answer anything on the psychology of human (and equine) relationships, just ask!
Seth felt like he had about four strokes, three heart attacks, and a bout of ass cancer all at the same time from an adorability injection so powerful, his pancreas was begging for a mercy killing from all the insulin required to prevent his spine from slithering out his anus.
How long did it take you to come up with a sentence like that
I don't what's good the frosting on the cake or the cake by its self or maybe both this is one hell of a story
The butterflies were back with a vengeance of their parents being gunned down in an alleyway, and his heart was playing bongos with his ribs. He suddenly thought of a select few of his friends who weren’t the ‘relationship’ type for whatever reason—and that was totally their prerogative… but he pitied the poor fuckers who would not know such joys as dickhead butterflies and a lightness in the chest so specific as this.
This story intrigued me very much - my heart flutters so hard that my fingers vibrate, I will now move on to the next chapter.
However, I must say - I was confused by the phrase "And remember, no Russian." - I don't know if you could have guessed that the Russians would read this story, but it's a little offensive. In any case, I translated it for myself with a poisonous connotation.
Сет... Ну и дурак он! Зря связался с ней.... Как по мне Шни ухватилась за возможность держать рядом собой мужика для удовлетворения своих потребностей. Ну это моя теория что я пока понял...
YUS!
The Crusaders have an interesting take in this fic, but I kinda like them without the overly childlike ignorance.
Schnee is adorable! After getting used to Stella, it's a big change
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They're teenagers by this point (and there's more color on this in Schnee's main trilogy) so they'll have more maturity around them.
Yeah I needed a break from Stella--she was starting to not be funny to write anymore which meant I was writing too much of her, so here I am. She'll be back funnier than ever though!
Hnnnng! Schnee is so feckin' cute.
And Seth... you bloody memelord.
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I meant that I think that you aged up the Crusaders personalities well. Changing the age of any established character can definitely go wrong if done incorrectly.
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Oh, well thanks! Yeah I definitely agree that it can be done terribly
Holy fuck there are a lot of references
I’m scared. He still has to go to basic training in a few months.... how is all this gonna work? I better get my permission slip signed Incase there turns out to be a feels trip.
I know nothing of the previous stories... but would a four year combat Vet who’s been out for five years be interested in a kid who has never even been to Basic yet? There is a YAWNING GULF of life experience between them. They are (or should be) at different points in their lives. Seth is still figuring out who he is, and she’s probably trying to put herself back together.
Dude, I am the one who makes shitty references to the point where my editors say "You're memeing too hard and too fast."
BUT IT STILL IS GOOD
I see this story has the two worlds connected. I Take it everything is going to be happening on Equestria eh? No actual parts happening on Earth?
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No spoilers on that front
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Would probably depend on the individuals in play. Some would just want to finish composing themselves and others want to have some semblance of normalcy I'd figure
You are right though. The valley between the two of them is quite large. Would be interesting to see how this works
Full Metal Jacket reference.
I love this. I love everything about this.
Although the memes get a little crazy at times.
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Bingo! you win a cookie.
Lovely! I quite like Seth’s character, maybe it’s because I find his inner voice relatable... too relatable. I know it’s a clopfic an’ all, but somehow the pacing feels fine! I’m just a bit uncertain of their chemistry as a couple for now... eh probably just ptsd from my psych test on human relationships.
I do think you’ll find it’s concepts useful! Nothing wrong with the story (or more scientific research)!
Look up: Social penetration theory, self-disclosure, Knapp's relational development model- heck I’ll answer anything on the psychology of human (and equine) relationships, just ask!
How long did it take you to come up with a sentence like that
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Not long at all which is kinda concerning lmao
I'm new to the character, but I'm already in love with the story. Great work so far, and I'm really looking forward to getting farther into it!
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Thank you! Hope you enjoy the remainder of the ride!
This is a great story so far. Very well written and executed.
How in hell did u come up with this sentence
I don't what's good the frosting on the cake or the cake by its self or maybe both this is one hell of a story
The butterflies were back with a vengeance of their parents being gunned down in an alleyway, and his heart was playing bongos with his ribs. He suddenly thought of a select few of his friends who weren’t the ‘relationship’ type for whatever reason—and that was totally their prerogative… but he pitied the poor fuckers who would not know such joys as dickhead butterflies and a lightness in the chest so specific as this.
>kono dio da in 2019
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This story intrigued me very much - my heart flutters so hard that my fingers vibrate, I will now move on to the next chapter.
However, I must say - I was confused by the phrase "And remember, no Russian." - I don't know if you could have guessed that the Russians would read this story, but it's a little offensive. In any case, I translated it for myself with a poisonous connotation.
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LOL not at all—it’s a Call of Duty meme
i wont question why there's a link to laughter.
Сет... Ну и дурак он! Зря связался с ней.... Как по мне Шни ухватилась за возможность держать рядом собой мужика для удовлетворения своих потребностей. Ну это моя теория что я пока понял...