The 25 Days Of Hearth's Warming

by Sparkle Productions

Day 10: Smile, You're On Camera

The 25 Days Of Hearth's Warming
Day 10: Smile, You're On Camera
Sparkle Productions

A large crowd gathered in Twilight's castle. Today was holiday photo day. Pinkie was cheerful as usual.

The first pony was called, which was Ditzy. Then the next pony was called.

Rainbow and Soarin took their photo together. "Are you sure we have to share a scarf, Pinkie?" Rainbow asked.

"Yes! Smile, you're on camera!"

It was a happy day. Everypony's photo looked fantastic and the snow glistened in the sun. Nothing could ruin it. Nothing at all. Even Rainbow enjoyed sharing a scarf with Soarin. Pinkie enjoyed that part too.

Author's Note:

Sorry it's so short. I was pushing for time. Stay tuned for more!!

Comments

[Dashie04]

A large crowd gathered in Twilight's castle, today was holiday photo day. Pinkie was cheerful as usual.

The first pony was called, which was Ditzy. Then the next pony was called.

The paragraph shouldn’t end here, I don’t think...

Rainbow and Soarin took their photo together, "Are you sure we have to share a scarf, Pinkie?" Rainbow asked.

It was a happy day. Everypony's photo looked fantastic, and the snow glistened in the sun. Nothing could ruin it, nothing at all. Even Rainbow enjoyed sharing a scarf with Soarin. Pinkie enjoyed that part too.

The bolds are a few corrections I noticed. I think it would be easier if you pmed the story to me.