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Fluttershy being a summoner class fits very well, in how she takes care of animals and wouldn’t work well with her own weapon. I do however think that the armour Sol was wearing should have protected him from Luna’s assault down under unless she used her magic to remove the plate(s) that were designed to protect that part or something similar.
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Ah... I really don't want to spoiler but what I have planned for poor Fluttershy will make everyone hate me. Just because she has a summon now doesn't mean she needs other means to actually stay on the battlefield. Brightpaw isn't going to be the cute cuddly fox to her and what Luna will impart on her... let's just say it will seem so out of character for Fluttershy that she won't be recognizable by canon standards anymore after I'm done with her.
Regarding the cheap shot from Luna, her mirror images are perfect copies of the original, meaning they also have the Alicorn levels of strength. A little piece of plate won't stop her from inflicting pain if she wants to. ;)
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Sounds like someone made a large dent in a perfectly good piece of armour then, meaning it had to be either smithed back into shape or magically bent back into shape.
Can't wait for the next chapter
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I'd recommend it be a tag, but there isn't a tag for 'human AU' like there is for anthro. It doesn't make the story bad or anything, I'm still reading it, but I do think that going into the story with the expectations of ponies and seeing it all as human instead was jarring. Makes me wonder how many others just... quit reading because of that.
On the flipside, people who are looking for a human AU will be able to check the description and be delighted to know it's a human AU.
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Huh... you might have a point there. Thanks for the feedback! :)
So, in order:
Twilight: Mage
Applejack: Tank
Rainbow Dash: Rogue(?)
Pinkie Pie: ???
Rarity: Uh....blade storm?
Fluttershy: Summoner? Beast master?
Sol: Fighter of some kind?
Lux: Archer
That sound about right? Or close enough, at least?
Edit:
Thats it?! Damnit! I hate cliffhangers! ;-;
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Pinkie would be the heavy hitter/armor breaker, but the rest is basically spot on. Well, I would say Lux is also kind of a mage, she does sort of rely on illusions.
I'll be posting the next chapter a week from now, kinda decided to wait on that because that's the day of my Birthday and thought it would be a good idea to release it then. Aside from that, I've been working on another story the past few weeks, but I don't know when I'll release that one.
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Ah, well, in those cases, take your time! I don't mean to rush, but it's a good story, yaknow? Keep up the quality, and I'll be fine with the quantity.
As for Pinkie and Lux, Pinkie being the heavy hitter/armor breaker makes sense.
Lux....illusions....bow....sneeki.... assassin?
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No worries, I'm not being rushed. I have chapter 19 almost finished, still, I need to go over the rest of the chapters for final edits. Although, I'm more preoccupied with my new story at the moment.
Lux being the assassin... that does describe it pretty well, I have to say. I'm pretty sure that it is going to become way more obvious by chapter 10.
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Chapter ninete-holy moly! Well, as someone who regularly follows experienced writers and their habits, I'll say you're doin great. I'm interested to see what the other story is with how great this one is!
So, team composition is:
Twilight: Mage
Applejack: Tank
Rainbow Dash: Definitely rogue
Pinkie Pie: Anti-tank
Rarity: Blade storm
Fluttershy: Summoner/Beast master
Sol: Fighter(Brawler?)
Lux: Assassin
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Sol is a sword fighter if I would equal him to a WoW class, he would be a warrior/paladin. And yeah, Rainbow is the typical fast-hitting rogue, avoiding enemy attacks and exploiting weaknesses.
As for my other story, I don't have a title for it yet. What I can say, though, is that it's going to be a reincarnation story. I don't want to spoiler it, so you'll just have to wait, sorry.
Lmao I'd expect this to be said by Rainbow Dash. I'm can't remember her ever saying anything like that in the show but it just seems to fit her personality.
I love that little fox. It's a kitsune, right? I can't remember if kitsunes have 2 or 3 tails.
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Kitsune can have anywhere from 1 to 9 tails, depending on things such as age, wisdom, and power
I immediately got really bad vibes when Luna summoned a Kitsune. They have a thing for extremely malicious trickery even towards their masters, regardless of how powerful they are. We're talking long con shit like pretending to be completely loyal and then ignoring orders or outright betraying the master when it benefits them most. They see playing with mortals as a game, and pretending to be subservient is one of their favorite tricks.
Like, you probably aren't going anywhere near there in your interpretation of them but it still gave me some seriously bad vibes when I read the description of what Luna had summoned. Not to mention, Luna isn't necessarily privy to the fact that Fluttershy has access to the stare. This was a calculated risk but it was more or less a shot in the dark. I'm assuming that if this one failed she would have tried to summon something else, which is kinda OOC for luna in this fic considering she already has a good sense of ideal/most compatible combat and weapon styles for the rest of the main characters. It's probably the only complaint I have about this chapter since it broke my immersion pretty swiftly.