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This chapter was good, I liked Sol’s meeting Twilight and I can see a lot of fun moments coming up in the future...
This is your friendly commenter letting you know that in the context of “I would have to do this”, contracting it to “I would’ve to do this” is incorrect grammar and there is a difference between then and than, but can’t put it into words and would recommend a grammar website for getting oneself up to speed or a memory refresh.
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Thanks! I'll look into the would have to do this thing, haven't come across that yet, I'm not a native speaker as one can possibly assume, the thing with then and than I have most likely not spotted as I read over it, I'll fix that.
Nice to see you commenting on every chapter, I appreciate that very much :)
you are welcome, and We are always happy to help because making sure Grammar and spelling are correct just enhances the experience and the story is too good for us to let it fall due to something easily remedied.
in the following picture, the contractions present are purposefully incorrect grammar
https://goo.gl/images/9rz5Ry
it unfortunately did not work with the embed image but the link should work
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Okay, I hope I did it justice, although it felt like I only deleted most of the misuses. Maybe I should ask someone to help out, but I'm a bit reluctant to rely on other people to help me with this. Thanks, appreciate your help as always, though! :)
Actually, pretty much any healthy male in their situation would find time to explore own female body and likely will be looking for contraceptives considering the possibility of entire new way of pleasing himself in ways unimaginable. Having both kinds of pipelining is quite unique situation to pass, after all.
Apparently, something really screwed with his head for not even thinking about that. ...or this is just shock from all the new experiences so far.
That's quite bold, isn't it? I'm not aware of German traditions, but isn't he was stopped to kiss the back of her hand?
Wat is it a real thing?