This looks promising.

Dear Mr B-25,
I normally don't favorite incomplete stories with only one chapter, as I have explained to you before. However, between the discussion we had about the sour lemon you were forced to write and the clear quality of your other works, in addition to the apparent direction of this piece, I have decided to forgo the wait for the second chapter, and am immediately putting this on my "favorite" and "tdf" shelves! Please Sir, I want some more.

Your humble watcher from the shadows,
Grungar von Drachen.

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Good to hear from you again, friend.

I so want to see how this continues, now

Eh, had to skip the entire chapter since I'm not into lesbian garbage so I have no idea how good the start is. So, did Rarity ever actually sit down with Spike and give an actual answer to his crush on her before she became a sleazy whore?

Nice

This is interesting to say the least. I honestly really hope we do get some answers to the situation of Spike and Rarity's relationship and where it is at the moment. I mean they seem so up in the air at the moment. I think also a HUGE thing we all most likely want to know is why or how she got into porn in the first place? And is she still doing it? I mean it is a VHS so I can only assume it is from a long time ago seeing how I can see them at LEAST having DVD by this point in time. I can see us getting answers to why she is showing up in the middle of the night at Spike's house since that is pretty random. And lets be honest she isn't like Pinkie or Dash she seem like the type to do that just to hang out. Hell Rarity seem like she wouldn't know how to hang out at all. Could you see her sitting around eating pizza and watching enjoyably bad movies? lol.

Hopes she enjoys getting creampied in the future chapters. Plus be sure to include pornographic words such as facials and creampies that would add more to the charm.

So, who’s the cover artist?

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Hioshiru

You know, if he really had watched that video a thousand times, it would have degraded into unwatchability. Also, you don't need a remote, the simple control functions have butttons on the frontof the machine. Failing that he could just pull the plug out of the wall. Just saying.

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you make fiction sad : (

Off to a good start.

So, Rarity is his best friend and longtime crush, but she's also a very renowned pornstar? Just how did these two meet? Do they engage in any normal social functions as friends? Does everyone tease Spike about his best friend being a porn star? If they met before Rarity became a pornstar, just what did Spike initially think of her career choice? Did he try to talk her out of it (before he started jerking to it, of course)? If they met after she was a pornstar...just how does one meet and become "besties" with a pornstar?

...No, seriously, how?

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Mate it's literally canon with the exception of 'Rarity made a porno one time' and 'Spike is older and has got his own place'. Not much else to it.

FUCKHIDEITSHERQUICKYOUSTILLHAVETIME!!!!!!!!!

The details of his apartment blurred into obscurity as he watched the camera pan in on Rarity, lounging on a sunbed, sand all around her.

I don't like sand.

But where's the spark?

Beep Boop 2nd chapter? ^^

Two months, no new chapter :(

Dang it! Canceled...

Nooooooooooooo

can we ask why it was canceled?

Now i'm happy :]

*casts revive*
This deserves an ending :p

go on