Going to point out you can't call something consequences free if it results in some one being pregnant.

That's a consequence.

My question is just how much the birth rate has gone up? Cadance may have done this so she can sleep around more freely.

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Chapter 2 (published tomorrow) goes into that with a bit more detail.

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Well, yeah. But maybe a desired one?

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Shining had better knock her up by the time the day is over. Otherwise, he's perverting the very reason his wife enacted the holiday!

Well, since Shiny didn't clean off his cock before it was put back in Twilight, this means there's still cum on it and now in her. Guess he forgot about that.

So birth rate is in decline so the answer is inbreeding?

All chapters contain perfectly accepted and consequence-free infidelity and lots of raunchy anthro pony sex!

Why that sounds—

anthro

Oh, well, never mind then. I prefer my ponies with hooves and my humans with hands. The rest of you have fun, though.

I'm curious as to if you have the whole thing planned out, or if you're accepting suggestions for pairings for future chapters.

so its like the purge minus the killing and more sexier

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We’ll get into that a bit more in the next chapter (from Princess Cadance’s POV). She may have had some ulterior motives for the whole thing.

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Heh. It’s in the impregnation group for a reason!

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Inbreeding is always the answer.
What’s gone wrong with American politics? Inbreeding.
What should I have for breakfast? Inbreeding.
What’s 42 times 5? Inbreeding.

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If it makes you feel better, these anthros have got hands. *shrug* Well, at least I have plenty of full-on pony stories for you as well. And even a few humanized ones.

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I have 4 chapters planned out (and 2 fully written). That will probably be the full extent of this story, unless my Patreon supporters ask for more chapters/pairings.

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The best kind of purge.

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That was the other thing I was considering.

Honestly, the first chapter doesn't really have much story. It's mostly just a paint by the numbers Twilight and Shining incest story with meh clop at best, and things I think are supposed to be funny but are really just awkward. Add to that a distinct lack of knowledge on how open relationships work, what with that being ignored, and this 'Sharing Day' concept taking all the bite out of the kinks and characters and this is just boring, and straight bad in places like the AWFUL exposition at the beginning. I would have thought this was a non-con story with how forced it was.

But yeah, not a good or exciting story really, even for those looking just to get their rocks off, with a bleh at best concept. Downvote, and I recommend you just pass on it.

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Heh, wow. Harsh.
But it’s good to get criticism! ^.^ That’s rare these days, and it’s still very helpful when it comes to improving future stories.

I'm looking forward to the Pinkie Pie x Mr. Cake chapter. It's of my favorite pairings, but there's so little of it on this site.

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Heh, that one might be quite a while though... I haven’t written it yet.

Not bad, nothing amazing either, but pretty decent, normal Twicest. Love the idea, perfect excuse for random fucking. Clop was, again, decent, if a bit average, but still fairly hot, and with plenty more in store for later. Not really much to say about this so far beyond that, good set up, decent overall work to start it off.

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Heh, I’ll really have to spice up later chapters, I guess. This one seems to have everyone yawning.

This has promise. I like the idea of sharing, since I do stories for swinging, so I know I will keep track of this story. It has promise but it will depend on how well you deliver with the other chapters.

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I do hope I can deliver! ^.^

>Consequence free infidelity
>Impregnation
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Unless it's illegal in Equestria unlike in much of the western world, a politician saying it's consequence-free, that it "isn't cheating", means absolutely nothing, and I certainly doubt there wouldn't be any hard feelings. If you're running the story on a logical disconnect, leave it in the story, not the description.

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They can always just get abortions if they want.

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Last I checked, that too was a consequence. Sweet Celestia, OP.

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It makes me sad to know how little of a good person you are.

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Lighten up, guys. What? We can’t joke about it?
If there’s something you can’t joke about, then there’s something that has power over you.

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It isn't cheating if all parties consent. Nineteen years in a fully open, and poly relationship here, we all have lovers outside the relationship too. No hard feelings, no "cheating" because everything is above board.

Truth > gut reactions.

Real shame the story seems to have caught the attention of the downthumb crew. (the idiots on this site that downthumb because 'wafiu/subject/just to downthumb)

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Considering that Shining Armor and Twilight Sparkle both seem to be exceptional specimens, who likely have fantastic genes, a little inbreeding isn't likely to do much harm as long as it doesn't go on for numerous generations. In fact, if their genes are free of any 'risky genes' (such as ones requiring specific, affected, genes from both parents to activate any number of genetic conditions), there shouldn't be any risk at all even after a a dozen generations. After all, you can't make worse what isn't there in the first place. And since this is fiction, it's 100% possible to make that the case.

Why can't everyone in Equestria just be poly? They could love and have sex with as many people as they want and they wouldn't have to wait for a holiday.

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Oh, so you prefer bestiality. Okay.

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Heh. No, I just prefer ponies with ponies or human s with human s. Ponies with hands just weird s me out.

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I prefer a humanoid form in my clopfics. Anthro, EqG Human, or regular Human all work for me. Horse on horse is just weird to me, especially the anatomically correct ones. Although, I don't seem to have the same problem with dogs, weirdly, as long as the dog is on the giving end.

Man, everyone's getting on the incest bandwagon these days. I trust in your authorial chops, so we shall see.

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While you may be correct about the letter of the term, the spirit of it definitely is not applicable to Equestrian ponies. Sapience makes all the difference.

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Eh, it’s okay. I’m a clopfic author ... often of some controversial subjects. I’m used to it.
I barely even care about upvote/downvote ratio anymore.
What I care about is: how many people read it?

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With enough incestuous generations, even with perfect genes to start with (and nobody has perfect genes), there’s still the problem of mutations. Any random gene mutation has a high probability of getting expressed (instead of a low probability), and most mutations are harmful.
This effect may be why some highly-inbred societies/royal families have genetic diseases unique to that group -- it started as a mutation in one of their ancestors.
(Though, not all mutations are harmful. Some are beneficial. Incest might serve as a natural turbo-mode for evolution when a population gets too small or too isolated, helping it more quickly find beneficial mutations that may bring the population back from the brink of disaster.)

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Why can't everyone in Equestria just be poly?

Because then getting to have sex with someone other than your wife wouldn’t be as special. ^.^

Oh, so you prefer bestiality. Okay.

Kinkshaming? In my comment section? What has the world come to?
Let me tell you, young whippersnapper, I have half a mind to write an publish an actual bestiality story, just to spite the lot of you!

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Man, everyone's getting on the incest bandwagon these days.

Well, it’s a pretty fun bandwagon. At least for brother/sister or sister/sister incest, I think. Parent/child incest still kind of creeps me out, and I generally don’t like it.
Maybe it’s because I didn’t have a sister when I was growing up, which can leave my fantasies of how awesome it could be to have one un-tarnished by the realities of what having sisters is actually like.

I trust in your authorial chops, so we shall see.

^.^ It’s good to have a reputation ... and it’s more than just follower count. I do think the second chapter is better (and it’s published now), so I guess we’ll see.

While you may be correct about the letter of the term, the spirit of it definitely is not applicable to Equestrian ponies. Sapience makes all the difference.

Sometimes I wonder how far that could bend, especially with some of the most intelligent species we have around ... dolphins, orcas, the great apes...
Some of them, when educated, are able to communicate in some degree of detail with humans. You can have a conversation with them...

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Maybe it’s because I didn’t have a sister when I was growing up, which can leave my fantasies of how awesome it could be to have one un-tarnished by the realities of what having sisters is actually like.

I think you've perfectly described the thought process of most people on the "incest fantasy bandwagon". In reality, I think the Westermarck effect does a lot to make it disgusting, unless you're affected by the Oedipus complex.

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Ooh! Now I have a name for it!

Could have benefited from impregnation, but still, the way it's written had me gushing buckets regardless. Good work. PLEASE do more incest stuff.

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Heh, I’ve got quite a bit of incest stuff already. ^.^ Probably more on the way, too, of course.
And as for impregnation ... well, there’s some in this story, pretty much. Most of the time, I leave it a little bit up in the air. After all, it’s hard to know in the heat of the moment whether there’s actually been impregnation or not.

Though, if you want a story with incest and impregnation, Overdoing It comes to mind...