As you can probably tell this isn't a chapter. I want to know what you want in this story. Twilight will be returning to Ponyville and will be reunited with her friends and parents but what else do you want? At the moment I have a few ideas but not that many so I turn to you the readers. Give me good ideas for the story.
Here is a list of current Ideas I have and will be putting in the story:
So these are the things I have planed but I want to do more. So here is how you can help me, go down into the comment and post your ideas. If you want me to immediately see it them PM (Personal message) me as I normally look at those the first chance I get. Now I cant promise that every one of your suggestions will go into this so if it isn't accepted then don't feel bad as I may put it in future chapters.
That being said any chapters I make will have the one who posted the Idea and the idea itself at the start of the chapter as a sign of respect to the person. If you don''t want this then PM your Idea to me and ask to remain anonymous, I will respect your privacy.
I want you readers to enjoy the story and I hope this will help you enjoy it more.
i would like a explanation on the cores like Shy-core is it ment to be her freinds turned in to cores or more personifications of them i a robot form
Which one of your stories is the previous story?
Have her link with SHY-CORE
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There will be some explanation but this is more of the over arching story line, the answer is given but at the same time it won't.
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That's what I plan, Twilight technically can't/shouldn't even leave Canterlot with out having another CORE to assist in keeping her metastability in check but she really has no choice if she wants to leave.
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Sorry I don't understand. This is my third story I've made on this site but I don't know if this is what you're asking, sorry.
Have an ending.
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all of the above just anyone but starlight for the romance
I’m game for everything on the list. Especially Hk and Blueblood.
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No problem. You've got good ideas and if you work on your delivery a bit, I'm sure you'll go far.
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Already have a romance planed sorry.
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Thank you.
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Really?
Sarcasm aside I plan to simply let the story grow but I will have an end. But I need actual ideas.
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If it's on the list then I'm going to dd it in but I need more ideas.
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It is an idea. Or do you plan running this story forever?
You know what I want? I want the gritty details of a sovereign nation being created in the bombed out capital of Equestria.
Now that there’s contact, Celsestia and Luna can’t just ignore it and go “Twilight’s got it lol.”
Another point is the integration of these societies.
These are two completely different cultures, the Equestrians would have a field day with the Clockwork! But between the possibility of death in Canterlot streets, and the lack of pony in the safer places, I can’t imagine there wouldn’t be racism towards the Clockwork.
I don’t know, I probably should not read this hard into stories, but I really like how this stories starting out! You have done a good job Mr/Ms. Author!
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Who said you were?
sunset's reaction?
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Aaaah. That makes much more sense.
Thanks!
Also, good luck with writing. I can see you're already doing better then I, but hey, good luck has never hurt anybody. (Maybe. xD)
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Murphy's Law.
So any plans for Twilight to interact with the changedlings?
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If someone comes up with a reason for them to meet, maybe.
IDE say 1 sounds good.
4 and 5 can be combined
but i like 4 the most
i think next chapter should be twilight and the princess get twilight to shycore before meet everyone else, for her own safety and everyones,
maybe have one of the mane 6 find out twilight is back but at shy core tell everyone they rush to see her.
There definitely needs to be more explanation into the disaster, and perhaps the initial aftermath to it. You can probably add that when Twilight meets her friends again. Also, I don't know if or how Spike will factor into this, but that is a prime oppotunity for some emotional moments, if you feel like writing that.
Oh, and that hinting about Blueblood... ohohohoho, please please please have him insult Twilight as a freak or something, and then... oh, and only then... he will be screwed. Big time. If you want to show that Twilight's much more heartless than before, then that's the perfect way to do it.
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Well considering the CORES was sabotaged and assuming the wedding and thorax’s take over have happened Crysalis would be pissed and looking for revenge. I know I would.
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It's not changelings but your on the right track.
The sabotage thing gives me a few Assasinverse vibes, maybe draw on a few things from that?
Oh, and Pinkie going crazy trying to invent a cake that Twilight and her 'kids' can eat.
I got a idea! Post the date and time and the time left till she goes insane, or have how sane she is.
If choice 2 is picked you can make the story degrade with her mind when from Twis pov and when she is near C.O.R.E.S. she is hooked up to her sanity goes up.
Twilight meets her old "friends" from CSGU.
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Who are they? If it's from the new seasons I don't know it. Still in season five or early six.
Also running on 2 hours sleep. So it may be that.
Ideas eh? Well I have a few half baked concepts to throw at ya
1. Pony - Clockwork relations: how would ponies react to life that isn’t... natural
2. Twilight - CORES life together: Two minds never agree forever so what happens when they disagree? Who’s in control when it comes down to the worst scenario?
3. Bugs in the code: What makes the Clockwork special besides being machine? What’re their quirks and how TF would a cutie mark work? Do they get cutie marks? How pony are these robots?
4. Children’s children: Wouldn’t be absolutely hilarious if something Twilight couldn’t explain came up? What if the Clockwork had children? Let me explain. So the general direction is that the Clockwork get out of Canterlot so what if a pony and Clockwork mixed it up together? You could think of it as sharing souls. Amidst the intimacy they share souls into the new soul that is going to be born. Even though they’re mechanical they DO have a soul. With the explanation above we could get Clockponies and more! Maybe the same could be applied to two Clockwork getting together but in the end they don’t ALL have to be Twilight’s children... unless that’s where your going with it I can’t judge.
5. You read this far: Both in wow, you read all that, but also another idea. Twilight isn’t explaining everything. One doesn’t simply slice your own soul without knowing a little in advanced. How’d she even learn where to start? She DID do it but magically slicing the soul doesn’t come naturally... what mysterious and illegal things has Twilight done?
Anyways that’s my spew of various ways to write up this story and if nothing gets in oh well I should just write my own then eh?
Edit: we know this is post Season 4 but where exactly are we in the timeline? Would help to know so more specially tailored ideas can be made regarding new characters in future seasons and stuff
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If it isn’t changelings then it’s politicians... it’s ALWAYS politicians
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CSGU is Celestias School for Gifted Unicorns, so they are Lemon Hearts, Twinkleshine, Lyra, Minuette and Moon Dancer.
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Ah so it was me being tired and a bit stupid. I honestly forgot about them. I might put then in a chapter. Don't know yet.
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Ok so I will comment on your Ideas in order:
1. Pony - Clockwork relations: I do have some ideas for this. No I won't tell because of spoilers.
2. Twilight - CORES life together: Twilight is the dominant personality unless she directly hooks up to the CORE and when this happens they merge into one being. Think of the CORE AI's as those from HALO only instead of a suit there in her actual mind and help keep her sane. However just wait till you meet Rare!CORE.
3. Bugs in the code: This will be a more in the background thing. each Clockwork has their own personality and quirks you'll see in Chapter 4. Also they do get cutie mark but they don't know it yet.
4. Children’s children: I love this concept I have to find a way to put it in later. I could be so much fun. Especially if the hinted at Twilight romance happens.
As to when this is in the timeline the cannon part ended at the start of season 5 in this story. So everything in season 5 and after never happened. Instead Twilight discovered Magitech and the timeline split.
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Got it in two.
Now I set back and watch the theories pore in. Yes, grandpa need his conspiracy theories.
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Just notice this question. So I plan on running this story till I either get tired of it or decide it's time to stop and move on.
I'd love to see #4, and I'm guessing #3 is Luna? That might be interesting.
Still need to watch the spelling as mentioned, though.
No. 2 sounds interesting, but what/who are the other Cores? Did the other members of the six get transformed as well (somehow), or were they made by Twi?
Number Five is vague, but might be interesting. It also sounds like the main plotline. One is kinda boring, to me, and six doesn't interest me at all.
My suggestion would be to try to stabilize/merge Twi as soon as possible. Obviously, you can have her relapse temporarily (effect of enemy attack?) if her free motion would be too much of a problem for a section.
Here's an idea I would LOVE to see if it hasn't already been added in.
Moon!CORE
Sun!CORE
Chrys!CORE
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A virus!
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And to that last one * 80's transformer's Movie theme starts to play *