Alright, fillies and gentlecolts, it's review time!
Grammar: It was very well done, the use of vocabulary was superb, using just the right word at just the right time, and I only saw a single spelling mistake, and it didn't even bother me too much.
Plot: Heheh, plot... Well! I thought the story was very well thought, and the progression was at the right speed so as to not make someone bored or to miss any details. The concept was, so to speak, good. It was intriguing, especially since you chose Scootaloo. The ending was brilliant, too.
Characters: The main character was enough of a mystery as to let you choose your own character, and I loved it. The way you showed Scootaloo's mark was pretty clever, too, so now it can be whatever we want it to be. Her daringness was hilarious, and very much in character and expected. Loved it.
All in all, a great story. Five stars... er, one thumbs-up...
Oh man, that was cold.
Scoots is such angel, eh?
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While it may have been cold, it was good. The story itself was good.
Here, have a dragon with a stache.
Ha! I'm glad I didn't let the clop get in the way. (Not my cup of tea, ETC)
Scootaloo... that's not even a troll. It's just... EVIL.
Alright, fillies and gentlecolts, it's review time!
Grammar: It was very well done, the use of vocabulary was superb, using just the right word at just the right time, and I only saw a single spelling mistake, and it didn't even bother me too much.
Plot: Heheh, plot... Well! I thought the story was very well thought, and the progression was at the right speed so as to not make someone bored or to miss any details. The concept was, so to speak, good. It was intriguing, especially since you chose Scootaloo. The ending was brilliant, too.
Characters: The main character was enough of a mystery as to let you choose your own character, and I loved it. The way you showed Scootaloo's mark was pretty clever, too, so now it can be whatever we want it to be. Her daringness was hilarious, and very much in character and expected. Loved it.
All in all, a great story. Five stars... er, one thumbs-up...
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...err, why exactly is this a reply to my comment...?
I mean, you're absolutely right in your analysis of the fic, but...
Okay, that was such an ass move on Scootaloo's part, though I did laugh out loud at it. I rather enjoyed this, my good man!
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979874 What the fu-
Sorry, bro, it's gone now.
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Right then, thanks.
Makes me wonder what you were going to say about my comment, though...
Was it not good enough?
979911 Oh shit, don't cry, don't cry...
FUCK!
Alright, maybe I'll make a review for your COMMENT!
Maybe...
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Or you could make a review for my story...
WHAT'S A GUILT TRIP?
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Nah, just kidding, I most likely will now!
Oh, and guilt trip? ):( Don't rustle my jimmies.
HAHAHA!
That was hilarious!
I loved this a lot.
Hope to see more!
Scootaloo = Troll
Get a guy horny on someone else's front porch then leave him like a boss.
TROLOLOLOL
Shame it's a one-shot. You could so milk this love-hate thing going on. Great job.
Couple of typos though.
That was good, I liked it!
Oh what a cockblock. >:(
Oh my!
Now we have to wonder what Dash would do with the poor pent up thing on her doorstep?
Nah, he had it coming!
Quite well written loved the pacing and overlooked the typos because I just can't be bothered to nitpick.
Wish you'd do more!
Oh man dude thats great! You should definitely continue the story, it has really good potential
that was a good one mon!
heheh, great stuff I tell ya
Problem?
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Wow, scootaloo became quite the teasing prankster eh? lol.
Dafuq? Did Scootaloo just set him up to get yelled at? Evil little genius!
2616733 that just happened... :bulkyeah: and throwing her off a cliff to get her cutie mark?
Drastic
This story is perfect for me because my OC is infact a young unicorn colt!
Pffft what a start!