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Oh man, that was cold.
Scoots is such angel, eh?
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While it may have been cold, it was good. The story itself was good.
Here, have a dragon with a stache.
Ha! I'm glad I didn't let the clop get in the way. (Not my cup of tea, ETC)
Scootaloo... that's not even a troll. It's just... EVIL.
Alright, fillies and gentlecolts, it's review time!
Grammar: It was very well done, the use of vocabulary was superb, using just the right word at just the right time, and I only saw a single spelling mistake, and it didn't even bother me too much.
Plot: Heheh, plot... Well! I thought the story was very well thought, and the progression was at the right speed so as to not make someone bored or to miss any details. The concept was, so to speak, good. It was intriguing, especially since you chose Scootaloo. The ending was brilliant, too.
Characters: The main character was enough of a mystery as to let you choose your own character, and I loved it. The way you showed Scootaloo's mark was pretty clever, too, so now it can be whatever we want it to be. Her daringness was hilarious, and very much in character and expected. Loved it.
All in all, a great story. Five stars... er, one thumbs-up...
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...err, why exactly is this a reply to my comment...?
I mean, you're absolutely right in your analysis of the fic, but...
Okay, that was such an ass move on Scootaloo's part, though I did laugh out loud at it. I rather enjoyed this, my good man!
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979874 What the fu-
Sorry, bro, it's gone now.
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Right then, thanks.
Makes me wonder what you were going to say about my comment, though...
Was it not good enough?
979911 Oh shit, don't cry, don't cry...
FUCK!
Alright, maybe I'll make a review for your COMMENT!
Maybe...
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Or you could make a review for my story...
WHAT'S A GUILT TRIP?
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NO!!!
Nah, just kidding, I most likely will now!
Oh, and guilt trip? ):( Don't rustle my jimmies.
HAHAHA!
That was hilarious!
I loved this a lot.
Hope to see more!
Scootaloo = Troll
Get a guy horny on someone else's front porch then leave him like a boss.
TROLOLOLOL
Shame it's a one-shot. You could so milk this love-hate thing going on. Great job.
Couple of typos though.
Oh what a cockblock. >:(
Oh my!
Now we have to wonder what Dash would do with the poor pent up thing on her doorstep?
Nah, he had it coming!
Quite well written loved the pacing and overlooked the typos because I just can't be bothered to nitpick.
Wish you'd do more!
Oh man dude thats great! You should definitely continue the story, it has really good potential
that was a good one mon!
heheh, great stuff I tell ya
Please excuse the strange formatting. Knighty is working on the system and things still seem to be off. Mostly, I wrote this to try and cleanse and restart my brain. I also had no idea how people would react to writing true-blue clop content. So, best to just get it over with and try it. I wrote this in as short of a time as I could with no editing, so please forgive any mistakes. Or you can point them out if you like, and i'll fix them. I just wanted to stay as close to the original as possible as far as writing requirements and everything.
-M@
Hey, nice to see an expansion to the story. Well-written and amusing. Keep up the good work!
Problem?
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Pretty sweet! The explanation has me thinking of what will happen next. Keep it up, and have a dragon with a stache.
Hell sounds like we have a set up for Chapter 3!
“Why are you limping, Scoots?” Cause Rumble railed her brains out, duh.
Rainbow Dash has kids now?
1162679 I had actually envisioned it as Fluttershy's foal, and apparently I just forgot to type that in, in my haste. Never saw Dash as the foal-bearing type. Though, as I noted in the chapter, I could see Dash taking up the surrogate mother part for Scootaloo.
I'm glad to say that this was the first fic I read and that I love it
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I could see that as well, seeing as how Scoots idolizers her so much.
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"doesn’t have some magical berry scent or something ridiculous"
Yes. This.
1169221 Bitch Please
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this is my favorite fanfiction ever you must be god hope for more
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So...how's that whole "One-Shot" thing working out for ya?
Get partially raped by emotionally distraught Scootaloo... and she always seemed so nice.
I am still hella confused, that bitch be crazy. 
Image source looks like it comes from here.
1170247 I had a great open yet closed ending on the original that worked well, and it had a sweet albeit a bit dirty feel to it. Of course, I couldn't stand for that! I had to expand, I had to branch out. I had to be completely insane.
1171731 Nice spot, thanks. I'll update it now.
Okay, seriously confused. The overall mindfuckery going on here is just GREAT!!!
Scoots obviously has a thing for him otherwise she wouldn't have caught him and gotten injured doing it.
He has a thing for her (DUH!) and is deeply sorry about what he did.
She's still pissed about him pushing her off a cliff.
He's pissed cause she left him to deal with RD while he was in a compromised position.
She's conflicted He's conflicted now we just need a third wheel to make everyone go, "WTF???"
Looking forward to the next installment.
1171765 Oh trust me, I have no problem with more!
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I just feel like posting pics! Nothing else, carry on!
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You thought this was shit?
More seriously, is that a Minecraft Riker?
Most seriously, I hate it when people don't like what I write.
On a less emo kid note, the questions will all be answered in fourth and final chapter.
1181847 no I liked it because it is confusing and no that is Simon and Lewis (yogscast) or at least their original MINECRAFT skins!
But seriously I was confused and that's the da FUQ pic I had at the time
1183810 1181847 Lewis's skin is Will Riker; Simon's is a Khaz Modanian dwarf (WoW.)
1195961 their skins now (well Lewis's) are now their own
will you make something like this with apple bloom and sweetie bell?
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dammit, i already liked this story, why can't i like it again
*clicks anyways*
+1
wut?
If the pools deep enough, cliff diving can be a real rush.