An anthro take on the Rule 63 version of Twilight Sparkle, Dusk Shine, in an Equestria almost exactly as normal ... oh who am I kidding, it's a crack-verse with some serious social and political undertones. But this is mostly for the giggles, mates.
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Oh ho ho. I LIKE the hidden part of Fluttershy's family there! THAT is going to make the whole Batpony thing a little more fascinating. Also, I think Tia is going to spank some girls...
Poor Shining... still, romantic as hell that she found his love letters like that and just latched onto him. Terribly cute in fact. But ha! Go Velvet! Show that stalker what for!
Cady is going to need to calm the hell down if she ever wants to get in Shiny's pants.
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Strangely enough, you're not quite wrong about Celestia's response ...
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Really looking forward to more of your stuff. Hope reality gets easier so you can relax and enjoy your writing. So need to reread this story now too.
Shining Armor is learning the hard way to be careful of what you wish for, because you might just get it.
next time, when said group of girl get back to ponyville each of them wear a chasity belt with built in plug that happen to be shape like dusk cock, made of sunsteel so strong well made nothing can get them off also they key into dusk magic so only he can take them off......
great chapter now I got to reread the whole story
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right now
Nice chapter, worth the wait...
poor Dusk, so far the worst thing happened to him ( since his arrival at ponyvile)
Also, love the scene with Celestia at the start and then with Spine and the girls... I sense a little spanking.
And Poor Shining, hopefully, he and Cadance can have a Talk, before drastic measures are needed for the avatar of love.
You know kinda expected flutters to somehow have connections to Alucard the fuck mothering vampire
Well this was a very interesting chapter, I really loved lore the scene with Celestia's about Shy's possible family digerati and Shining Armor's... life issues with Cadance which made the story ten times more interesting then it was before.
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just reread the whole story and it so good, I do hope that cady grow up a bit get her head on right that or her trap in the mine for who knew how long before the wedding is what cure her of her lust and figure out how close she is to loose shiny she do anything to keep him as just a friend.....
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or, she could use this as an opportunity to get Applejack with Dusk and convince Dash how stupid the Sisterhood is.
"Hey you, orange one."
"Um, yes, your sunniness?"
"You realize you dun goofed?"
"Yes, your 'hopefully' very forgiving holiness."
"I can overlook your transgressions on one condition."
"Anything, oh grandiose one."
"Use Dusk Shine to provide me with magically powerful and physically strong grandbabies."
"What?"
Twilight Velvet: "What?"
"What?"
"Oh, don't worry colorful one. I want you to help too. You will be his mistress and make pegacorn grandbabies to be raised by me."
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Oh yeah, I can so see that happening.
Dusk's magical power, with the size and physical ability of the Apple family, or speed and weather related abilities of Dash/ Tia want a corp of shock troops or something?
What will happen to poor Dusk when Nightmare Moon is finally in play?
i cant wait to read more of this,also love how cady gets her ass handed toher by velvet XD
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I think she want strong willed powerfully grandbaby to play with,
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I betting nightmare will kidnap him for sun while spine/barb and girl go after him, only to see him run around the castle try get away form nightmare, happy to see the girl then bam the element, with 7th one being for barb/spine,
I think you're thinking of tetanus
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Not really, exposure to/inhalation of infected material, generally wet fertilizer, is pretty unhealthy in the best of situations, but its also been linked to multiple outbreaks of the disease in my country.
Tetanus can also be contracted from similar materials, but I figured the 'brick joke' that Immortals cannot be killed by mundane methods, and even the more exotic methods only take them down for a short while, was served better by Shining idly wondering if Cadence had contracted a potentially lethal disease with no vaccine.
I wonder if sunset is like that one kid to celestia that a LGBT kid is to a conservative household
I love shining so damn much in this story, he just seems like the most normal chill dude in this world and reminds me of my own brother.
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Same! It’s such a nice change of pace compared to how people typically write Shining Armor