An anthro take on the Rule 63 version of Twilight Sparkle, Dusk Shine, in an Equestria almost exactly as normal ... oh who am I kidding, it's a crack-verse with some serious social and political undertones. But this is mostly for the giggles, mates.
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Hymn ... i dont recall him saying he was cool with bringing fluttershy into their relationship.... i was under the impression he thought spine was being manipulated somehow and was wary of her. I got a feeling were gonna see a upset dusk next chapter when he finds out what spine did. Well I hope he does anyway ... getting back at her by screwing one of the other girls and rubbing her face in it might teach her to curb her dragon greed. I want I want I want doesn't make a good relationship work.
9228350 He didn't. And that's gonna be another thing that'll blow up later on.
I don't generally go cheating on the cheater route, but this is a porn story with a semi-coherent plot (not that kind of plot!) so let's just say things will start to get tangled sooner rather than later.
Damm I need more
Why do I get the feeling the second Sonic Rainboom isn't going to work the way Dusk is hoping.
I'm just waiting for that moment when Rainbow discovers that Dusk was originally a mare, and that her Sonic Rainboom is the cause of it. I foresee a B.S.O.D in her future.
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Hmmm, Neckbeard had her crushing on Twilight in his other story, so it might end up not being a big deal.
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This is not that story, so Rainbow's attraction from a different story has no relevance here.
Oh this is a gem of a story! Tracking and fav'd! I eagerly look forward to more! I am deeply curious how things will go with Chryssi and I am looking forward to her reaching Canterlot and getting an audience with Celestia. With Sweetie Belle being of interest to Dusk, Rarity will soon have her hood in the door. Can't wait to see how this growing Herd forms up! Also we are due a Pinkie Party soon! That should get the elements together... And not long now before Dusk meets Nightmare Moon! This is all so lovely!
Ponyvil where SNAFU is the low ball/white noise version of chaos, no wonder Discord loves the place.
9229808 It's less that Mayor Mare has a problem with corruption with herself/local government, but that there's a strata of the nation-wide government of Equestria that has been actively cloaking itself and syphoning funds away from towns like Ponyville, large enough to provide enough money but small and unimportant enough that nobody's complaints about a lack of funds will ever bypass the grinding bureaucracy that allows Celestia to keep hold of Equestria's reins and keep the nation on-track.
I'm not so sure Rainbow Dash should be happy about meeting the Princess in the flesh. Dusk might not have held a grudge that or he was too overcome with emotions to express how angry he was, but between the Princess and Dusk's family including Spine someone is bond to hold a grudge. I have a feeling someone is going to punch Rainbow Dash in the face before this is over.
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Agreed. My theory is its gonna make him more well endowed if you catch my drift.
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What Celestia's thinking when she funds out what Rainbow did to Dusk.
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Ah, that makes sense, and I agree that that's pretty horrible.
It's just that, for some of the Dusk Shine stories I've read, namely the ones where Dusk is a cynic, politics would be a method used to contextualize the plot for the audience, which might serve as a vested interest in resolving the conflict. And as Dusk interacts with a variety of other ponies, he'd see there's more to the world than he'd first reasoned from his experiences in Canterlot and reading dusty old books, much like Twilight from the show. But from what I got with these chapters, it seemed more like "Test examiners suck, nobles suck and are imbreds, imbred noble children suck too, Moondancer probably sucks, Sunset probably also might suck, a bunch of mares want in Dusk's pants and suck, even though Spine also wants inside his pants because of her weird emotion-based transformations yet doesn't suck, and Cadance sucks a lot because she's super obsessed with Shining in this story to a horrifying degree though I can't fathom why when they're supposed to be a couple that loves each other to begin with". It just made it seem like it was a black-and-white affair, where Dusk wouldn't really learn stuff because he'd already know enough about all the crazy stuff that's happened thus far, and everything he'd encounter would just be a vindication of such. By the second chapter, I was left thinking "Yeah, Ponyville's not the most opulent of towns, but does it have to be because they don't get enough funds? Does Equestria have to normally have electronics and wifi distributed throughout? Why can't it just be a quaint little village, when the most technologically advanced the show has seen are the rare rollercoaster, arcade machine, or movie theater?"
I dunno, it might get better, but the story just seemed off to me.
I really like the world building and I have a fondness for competent Twilight/Dusk. Looking forward to reading more.
hahahahahahahahaha. we definitely all saw that coming.
pshaw. who cares about that loser. everyone knows Luna is best princess. and you are gonna help save her.